Jan. 23, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 114
Today is day 114 of my daily English challenge. Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think it was misunderstanding. Of course, it was my fault because I am still not able to express what I want to say.
This is my sentence of yesterday.'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' So, I want to say: I promise myself to take care of her( my mother) and I won't let her do anything.
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Writing Challenge, Day 114
Today is day 114 of my daily English challenge.
Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think ithere was a misunderstanding.
Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think there was a misunderstanding.
Of course, it was my fault because I am still not able to express what I want to say.
This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.
This is my sentence from yesterday.
'"I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'"
"I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything."
We use double quotation marks with the initial quotation.
So, I want to say:, I promised myself to take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.
So, I want to say, I promised myself to take care of her (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.
oh, that's what I thought you meant so that's how I corrected it. :)
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Good work!
Writing Challenge, Day 114
Today is day 114 of my daily English challenge.
Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I thinkbelieve that it was misunderstandingood by many/was commonly misunderstood.
Yesterday I posted a sentence and I believe that it was misunderstood by many/was commonly misunderstood.
Of course, it was my fault the fault was mine because I am still not able to express what I wantexactly what it is that I’d like to say.
Of course the fault was mine because I am still not able to express exactly what it is that I’d like to say.
This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.
This is my sentence from yesterday.
'I promised myself tohat I would take care of my mother, and that I wouldn’t she do anything.'let her even lift a finger.’
'I promised myself that I would take care of my mother, and that I wouldn’t let her even lift a finger.’
C1 phrasing, conveys your intent (you are doing everything for her so she does not have to exert herself physically to perform tasks for herself physically, this is my interpretation).
So, what I wanted to say was: I promised myself to take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.to not allow her to exert herself in any way.
So what I wanted to say was: I promised myself to take care of her (my mother) and to not allow her to exert herself in any way.
Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think it was misunderstandingood.
Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think it was misunderstood.
This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.
This is my sentence from yesterday.
'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' 'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'
'I promise myself that I will take good care of her and I won't let her lift a finger.'
Maybe this is a better way of saying the expression?
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There is definitely nothing wrong with the expression. You helping your mother would probably be the best thing you can do for her :) You are doing amazing.
Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think ithere was a misunderstanding.
Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think there was a misunderstanding.
This iwas my sentence ofrom yesterday.:
This was my sentence from yesterday:
'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' 'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'
I haven't corrected this one as I guess it is a direct quote, but have proposed a way to rephrase it below :)
So, Iwhat I really wanted to say is: I promised myself tohat I would take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.
So, what I really wanted to say is: I promised myself that I would take care of her (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.
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It's frustrating when you aren't able to get your point across, but keep working on it! 114 days of writing is really impressive.
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So, I want to say: I promise myself to take care of her( my mother) and I won't let her do anything.
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So, I want to say oh, that's what I thought you meant so that's how I corrected it. :) |
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Of course, it was my fault because I am still not able to express what I want to say.
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This is my sentence of yesterday.
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'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' 'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' 'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' I haven't corrected this one as I guess it is a direct quote, but have proposed a way to rephrase it below :) 'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' 'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' 'I promise myself that I will take good care of her and I won't let her lift a finger.' Maybe this is a better way of saying the expression?
'I promised myself t C1 phrasing, conveys your intent (you are doing everything for her so she does not have to exert herself physically to perform tasks for herself physically, this is my interpretation).
We use double quotation marks with the initial quotation. |
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