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March 29, 2021

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Take-off

I like take-off when boarding an airplane. Before take-off, airplanes slowly move toward a runway. After the air traffic controller let them go, the engines work strongly, and then I feel the acceleration, pressed to the seat. Immediately following, resistance from the ground and noisy vibration disappear, which means the airplane succeeded in taking off. I like this sequence.

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Take-off

Before take-off, airplanes slowly move toward a runway.

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March 31, 2021

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Take-off

I like take-off when boarding an airplane.

Before take-off, airplanes slowly move toward a runway.

I like this sequence.

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March 31, 2021

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I like this sequence.


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I like how this sequencehappens. I like how this happens.

Your sentence is correct but we don't really talk or write this way in the US. or I like this process.

Take-off


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I like take-off when boarding an airplane.


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I like take-off when boardingI'm on an airplane. I like take-off when I'm on an airplane.

This sounds more natural in the US because "boarding" means getting on the airplane. We usually use "to ride" when actually on the airplane. or I like take-off when I'm riding on an airplane. I like when the airplane takes off when I'm riding on an airplane. The best part about riding on an airplane is the take-off.

Before take-off, airplanes slowly move toward a runway.


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After the air traffic controller let them go, the engines work strongly, and then I feel the acceleration, pressed to the seat.


After the air traffic controller lets them go, the engines work strongly, and then I feel the acceleration, pressed to the seat. After the air traffic controller lets them go, the engines work strongly, and then I feel the acceleration, pressed to the seat.

After the air traffic controller let them go, the engines work strongly, and thengives the pilots the okay, the engines start revving up, and I feel the acceleration, pressed to the seat. After the air traffic controller gives the pilots the okay, the engines start revving up, and I feel the acceleration, pressed to the seat.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Immediately following, resistance from the ground and noisy vibration disappear, which means the airplane succeeded in taking off.


Immediately followingafter, resistance from the ground and the noisy vibrations disappear, which means the airplane succeeded in taking off. Immediately after, resistance from the ground and the noisy vibrations disappear, which means the airplane succeeded in taking off.

Immediately followingafterwards, resistance from the ground and the noisy vibrations disappear, which means the airplane succeeded in taking off. Immediately afterwards, resistance from the ground and the noisy vibrations disappear, which means the airplane succeeded in taking off.

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