Jan. 30, 2023
The first night in SZ downtown was interesting. Diana found a room for us, and she gave us a phone number then went away. I dialed the phone number and got the address from a lady. The lady asked us to go to her house; however, when we reached the address, she couldn't open the door for us because she couldn't find the key to our room.
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are the first time in SZ, do not look like bad guys. Both of you can sleep in my room and I am going to my friend's house tonight because it's my fault. It's a double bed, I think it's enough for you two."
She was working at a bank nearby, around 30 years old, single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that let me have a deep memory even now.
Her room was sparkling tidy and clean, a Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed. I had a good sleep on the soft bed, I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.
The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation then left. I never talked to her again, but saw her once speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than me who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.
If I were to go back again, I would invite her to have a meal to show my thanks. She let me feel the warmth from SZ.
A special job was waiting for me, my boss would never regret hiring me and the university certificate was not the prerequisite. Boss only cares whether you can make money or not.
My Life in SZ (9)
The first night in SZ downtown was interesting.
Diana found a room for us, and she gave us a phone number and then went away.
Diana found a room for us, she gave us a phone number and then went away.
I dialed the phone number and got the address from a lady.
The lady asked us to go to her house;, however, when we reached the address, she couldn't open the door for us because she couldn't find the key to our room.
The lady asked us to go to her house, however, when we reached the address, she couldn't open the door for us because she couldn't find the key to our room.
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are here for the first time in SZ, and do not look like bad guys. The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are here for the first time in SZ, and do not look like bad guys.
Both of you can sleep in my room and I am goingwill go to my friend's house tonight because it'as it was my fault.
Both of you can sleep in my room and I will go to my friend's house tonight as it was my fault.
It's a double bed, I think it's enough for youthe two. of you.
It's a double bed, I think it's enough for the two of you.
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She said she was working at a bank nearby, was around 30 years old, single as she said, withnd had charming wavy hair and a warm smile that let me have a deep memory even now.of which i still have fond memories.
She said she was working at a bank nearby, was around 30 years old, single and had charming wavy hair and a warm smile of which i still have fond memories.
Her room was sparkling tidy and clean,clean and tidy. There was a Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.
Her room was sparkling clean and tidy. There was a Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs beside a double bed.
I had a good sleep on the soft bed,. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I had left my hometown.
I had a good sleep on the soft bed. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I had left my hometown.
The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation thenand left.
The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation and left.
I have never talked to her again, but I saw her once, in the bank, speaking with my colleague (athe young man who was 4 years older than me and who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.
I have never talked to her again, but I saw her once, in the bank, speaking with my colleague (the young man who was 4 years older than me and who slept on her bed with me that night).
If I were to go back again, I would invite her to have a meal to show my thanks.
She letmade me feel the warmth fromwelcome in SZ.
She made me feel welcome in SZ.
A special job was waiting for me, my boss would never regret hiring me and where the university certificate was not thea prerequisite. My boss would never regret hiring me.
A special job was waiting for me where the university certificate was not a prerequisite. My boss would never regret hiring me.
BThe boss only cares whether you can make money or not.
The boss only cares whether you can make money or not.
My Life in SZ (9)
The first night in SZ downtown SZ was interesting.
The first night in downtown SZ was interesting.
We usually say it in this order.
Diana found a room for us, and she gave us a phone number and then went away.
Diana found a room for us, gave us a phone number and then went away.
I dialed the phone number and got the address from a lady.
The lady asked us to go to her house; however, when we reached. When we arrived at the address, however, she couldn't open the door for us because she couldn't find the key to our room.
The lady asked us to go to her house. When we arrived at the address, however, she couldn't open the door for us because she couldn't find the key to our room.
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are theThis is your first time in SZ,. You do not look like bad guys.
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "This is your first time in SZ. You do not look like bad guys.
Both of you can sleep in my room and. I am going to my friend's house tonight because it'this is my fault.
Both of you can sleep in my room. I am going to my friend's house tonight because this is my fault.
It's a double bed,. I think it's big enough for you two.
It's a double bed. I think it's big enough for you two.
"
She was working at a bank nearby, was around 30 years old, and was single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left me havewith a deep memory even now.
She was working at a bank nearby, was around 30 years old, and was single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left me with a deep memory even now.
I'm not sure it's okay to describe "wavy hair" as "charming" but I like it so I'm leaving it alone.
Her room was sparkling tidy and clean, and tidy. A Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.
Her room was sparkling clean and tidy. A Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.
We use "sparkling clean" but not "sparkling tidy."
I had a good sleep on theat soft bed,. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.
I had a good sleep on that soft bed. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.
The next day, we carefully made up the bed and, left a message expressing our appreciation and then left.
The next day, we carefully made up the bed, left a message expressing our appreciation and then left.
I never talked to her again, but saw her once speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than meI who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.
I never talked to her again, but saw her once speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than I who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.
If I were to go back again, I would invite her to have a meal to show my thanks.
She let me feel the warmth ofrom SZ.
She let me feel the warmth of SZ.
いいですね。
A special job was waiting for me, m. My boss would never regret hiring me and the university certificate was not thea prerequisite.
A special job was waiting for me. My boss would never regret hiring me and the university certificate was not a prerequisite.
BThe boss only cares whether you can make money or not.
The boss only cares whether you can make money or not.
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いい話です。よく出来ました!
The first night in SZ downtown SZ was interesting.
The first night in downtown SZ was interesting.
Diana found a room for us, and s. She gave us a phone number and then went away.
Diana found a room for us. She gave us a phone number and then went away.
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are theIt's your first time in SZ, you do not look like bad guys.
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "It's your first time in SZ, you do not look like bad guys.
She was working at a bank nearby, around 30 years old, single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left me have a deep memory even now.
She was working at a bank nearby, around 30 years old, single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left a deep memory even now.
Her room was sparkling tidy and clean, a. A Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.
Her room was sparkling tidy and clean. A Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were beside a double bed.
I had a good sleep on the soft bed,. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.
I had a good sleep on the soft bed. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.
The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation, then left. The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation, then left.
I never talked to her again, but saw her once in the bank, speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than me who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.
I never talked to her again, but saw her once in the bank, speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than me who slept on her bed with me that night).
Your version is still correct but it sounds a little more natural like this!
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How nice! Good work!
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The first night in SZ downtown was interesting.
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Diana found a room for us, and she gave us a phone number then went away.
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I dialed the phone number and got the address from a lady. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The lady asked us to go to her house; however, when we reached the address, she couldn't open the door for us because she couldn't find the key to our room.
The lady asked us to go to her house
The lady asked us to go to her house |
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The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are the first time in SZ, do not look like bad guys.
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "
The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, " The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are here for the first time in SZ, and do not look like bad guys. The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are here for the first time in SZ, and do not look like bad guys. |
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Both of you can sleep in my room and I am going to my friend's house tonight because it's my fault.
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It's a double bed, I think it's enough for you two.
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She was working at a bank nearby, around 30 years old, single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that let me have a deep memory even now.
She was working at a bank nearby, around 30 years old, single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left
She was working at a bank nearby, was around 30 years old, and was single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left me I'm not sure it's okay to describe "wavy hair" as "charming" but I like it so I'm leaving it alone.
She said she was working at a bank nearby, was around 30 years old, single a |
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Her room was sparkling tidy and clean, a Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.
Her room was sparkling tidy and clean
Her room was sparkling We use "sparkling clean" but not "sparkling tidy."
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I had a good sleep on the soft bed, I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.
I had a good sleep on the soft bed
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I had a good sleep on the soft bed |
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The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation then left. The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation, then left. The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation, then left.
The next day, we carefully made up the bed
The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation |
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I never talked to her again, but saw her once speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than me who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.
I never talked to her again, but saw her once in the bank, speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than me who slept on her bed with me that night) Your version is still correct but it sounds a little more natural like this!
I never talked to her again, but saw her once speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than
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If I were to go back again, I would invite her to have a meal to show my thanks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She let me feel the warmth from SZ.
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A special job was waiting for me, my boss would never regret hiring me and the university certificate was not the prerequisite.
A special job was waiting for me
A special job was waiting for me |
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Boss only cares whether you can make money or not.
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