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Life without TV

I threw away my TV set because I hate watching TV stars I don't like, and because I felt TV shows boring.

It's been a while since I didn't watch TV.

I was so addicted to Youtube on my phone that my eye sight became pretty wrong.

I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touch my phone.

Recently, I found that I felt smarter when reading on paper sheets than reading on my phone.
I always watch anything absent-mindedly on my phone, but when reading on paper sheets, I feel my brain is clear.

Does this happen to only me?


テレビなしの生活

嫌いなタレントを見るのがイヤで、また番組がつまらないと感じたのでテレビを捨てました。

テレビを見なくなってしばらく経った。

Youtubeに依存し過ぎて視力がかなり落ちた。

スマホに触る時間を減らすためにビジネス誌を買うことにしている。

最近、気付いたのだが、スマホで読むよりも紙で読んだ方が頭が良くなる気がする。
スマホではいつもボケッとしながら視聴するが、紙媒体で読むと頭が冴える感じがする。

こう感じるのは私だけかしら?

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Life without TV

I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touch my phone.

Does this happen to only me?

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I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touch my phone.

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Aug. 24, 2024

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Life without TV

Does this happen to only me?

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Life without TV


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I threw away my TV set because I hate watching TV stars I don't like, and because I felt TV shows boring.


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It's been a while since I didn't watch TV.


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I was so addicted to Youtube on my phone that my eye sight became pretty wrong.


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I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touch my phone.


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Recently, I found that I felt smarter when reading on paper sheets than reading on my phone.


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I always watch anything absent-mindedly on my phone, but when reading on paper sheets, I feel my brain is clear.


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Does this happen to only me?


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