alexwong2164's avatar
alexwong2164

Jan. 18, 2021

0
Juice Profit. Because of 19.

Under this unpresented virus attack to the whole world.

Many business have been crashed.

Even giant company like hotel chain, flight, tourism…

My brother has lost unemployed more than one year.

Now, still can’t any jobs.

Havening said that some business under this circumstances are able making good profit.

Online shopping.

30 years ago, shopping on line is joke or a foolish act, now is part of our life no matter you are young or old.

Online communication tool (Zoom)
Actually, skype and many other similar tools already exists many years ago.

But this company just becomes the star.

The boss should say a big “thank you” to the virus.

That is 2 business I can tell, any one knows others? Do tell.

profit
Corrections (1)
Correction Settings
Choose how corrections are organized

Only show inserted text
Word-level diffs are planned for a future update.
0

But this company just becomes the star.

Do tell.

Do tell.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is 2 business I can tell, any one knows others?


That is 2 business I can tell, any one knows of any others? That is 2 business I can tell, any one know of any others?

Juice Profit. Because of 19.


Juice Profit. Because of COVID-19. Juice Profit Because of COVID-19

I don't understand what 'Juice' refers to here. 19 won't be understood as COVID-19 by English speakers, but you can shorten it to 'Covid.'

Under this unpresented virus attack to the whole world.


Under this unprescedented virus attack tospread across the whole world. Under this unprecedented virus spread across the whole world.

Many business have been crashed.


Many businesses have been crashedgone bankrupt. Many businesses have gone bankrupt.

Even giant company like hotel chain, flight, tourism…


Even giant companyies like hotel chains, flightairlines, tourism… Even giant companies like hotel chains, airlines, tourism…

My brother has lost unemployed more than one year.


My brother has lostbeen unemployed for more than onea year. My brother has been unemployed for more than a year.

Now, still can’t any jobs.


Now, he still can’t find any jobs. Now he still can’t find any jobs.

Havening said that some business under this circumstances are able making good profit.


Havening said that, some business under thisese circumstances are able makingto make good profits. Havening said that, some business under these circumstances are able to make good profits.

Online shopping.


Online shopping for example. Online shopping for example.

To connect it with the next sentence.

30 years ago, shopping on line is joke or a foolish act, now is part of our life no matter you are young or old.


30 years ago, shopping on line iswas a joke or a foolish act, now it is part of our life no matter if you are young or old. 30 years ago, shopping online was a joke or a foolish act, now it is part of our life no matter if you are young or old.

Online communication tool (Zoom)


OAnother is the online communication tool (Zoom). Another is the online communication tool (Zoom).

Actually, skype and many other similar tools already exists many years ago.


Actually, sSkype and many other similar tools already existsed many years ago. Actually, Skype and many other similar tools already existed many years ago.

But this company just becomes the star.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The boss should say a big “thank you” to the virus.


The bossir CEO should say a big “thank you” to the virus. Their CEO should say a big “thank you” to the virus.

'Boss isn't wrong but CEO is much clearer and more often used.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium