Another ask onquestion about writing. Another question about writing.

"Ask" can be used as noun informally, but it tends to be used to refer to tasks or favors. "On" can be used as a synonym of "about," but here, "about" seems more appropriate.

Another ask on writing. Another ask on writing.

Another request for having my writing corrected/ checked

But I always think my sentences sounds unnatural. But I always think my sentences sound unnatural.

You're talking about a situation in general, and the plural form is usually better for that.

But I always think my sentence sounds unnatural. But I always think my sentence sounds unnatural.

But I always think my sentences sound unnatural.

Could you please help me to correct it? Could you please help me correct it?

Online health care services provide the possibility of (quick) appointments and immediatenstant communication with doctors for consumers. Online health care services provide the possibility of (quick) appointments and instant communication with doctors for consumers.

The original was grammatical, but "appointments" by itself doesn't make sense since patients already are able to schedule appointments with doctors; it's just a question of when the appointments are. Similarly, "instant communication" is more idiomatic.

Online health care services provide the possibility of appointments and immediate communication withbetween doctors for consumerand patients. Online health care services provide the possibility of appointments and immediate communication between doctors and patients.

While in some, economic, sense it may make sense to say "consumers", in general it is more appropriate to refer to those who receive care from doctors as patients.

Online health care services provide the possibility of appointments and immediate communication with doctors for consumers. Online health care services provide the possibility of appointments and immediate communication with doctors for consumers.

... for patients. Or: online health care services provide patients with the benefit of being able to make appointments immediately and to communicate with their doctor faster.

But these technological advances face the Internet risks, making patients’ and hospital's’ data more vulnerable to hackers. But these technological advances face Internet risks, making patients’ and hospitals’ data more vulnerable to hackers.

Both patients and hospitals are plural here, so the apostrophe comes at the end.

But these technological advances face the Internet risks, making patients' and hospital's data more vulnerable to hackers. But these technological advances face the Internet risks, making patients' and hospital's data more vulnerable to hackers.

"The Internet risks" doesn't make sense at all. Perhaps you meant "inherent risks"?

ButHowever, these technological advances faceinclude risks from the Iinternet risks, making patients and hospital's' data more vulnerable to hackers. However, these technological advances include risks from the internet, making patients and hospitals' data vulnerable to hackers.

It is a bit clumsy to begin a sentence with "but" - some will tell you this is outright incorrect, but this is up for debate. Furthermore, describing the risks as belonging to the internet is a bit unclear, so I think it is better to simply specify from where the risks come. Additionally, I changed [hospital's] to [hospitals'], as the second is the plural form of the possessive and I assume you are speaking about more than one hospital. Finally, I removed the "more" before vulnerable, since you are not comparing this vulnerability to something else, rather you are simply stating that it exists.

But these technological advances face the Internet risks, making patients and hospital's data more vulnerable to hackers. But these technological advances face the Internet risks, making patients and hospital's data more vulnerable to hackers.

But these technological advances also come with risks typically associated with the Internet. For example, patient files and hospital data may be more vulnerable to hackers