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the government chasing the short term income.

The reason which the human doesn't willing to confront the influents of the pollution from the thriving industry, shrug off the warming, and insist to dig its heels, is that they were attracted by a short term blockbuster income.


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the government chasing the short term income.


tThe government chasis thinking in the short -term income. The government is thinking in the short-term

tThe government is chasing the short term income. The government is chasing short term income.

The reason which the human doesn't willing to confront the influents of the pollution from the thriving industry, shrug off the warming, and insist to dig its heels, is that they were attracted by a short term blockbuster income.


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This flows a bit better to me.

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