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Acky

Dec. 12, 2019

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A Woman's Trick

A woman's tears sometimes can go a long way. Some subordinate women made way too many mistakes. When seeing her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with a wrong person, but actually I just pointed out her mistakes as a supervisor. I don't want to see it. And top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, this kind of the women may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a technique she learned from her life. Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance, unfortunately, it does not work on me, this kind of technique is very tricky to use.

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Dec. 19, 2019

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When seeing her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with a wrong person, but actually I just pointed out her mistakes as a supervisor.

I don't want to see it.

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A Women's Trick


A Womean's Trick A Woman's Trick

A Womean's Trick A Woman's Trick

A women's few tears sometimes go a long way.


A womean's few tears sometimescan go a long way. A woman's tears can go a long way.

This is an alternative to the other correction.

A womean's few tears sometimes go a long way. A woman's tears sometimes go a long way.

Using "A" before a noun means the noun will be singular. Women is not singular. I think that few is redundant and doesn't sound natural (for this sentence).

Some subordinate women made way too many mistakes.


Some subordinate womean made way too many mistakes. Some subordinate woman made way too many mistakes.

SomeA subordinate womean made way too many mistakes. A subordinate woman made way too many mistakes.

I am assuming you are referring to one woman in your workplace.

When seeing her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with a wrong person, but actually I just pointed out her mistakes as a supervisor.


When seeingI saw her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with athe wrong person, but actually I just pointed out her mistakes as aher supervisor. When I saw her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with the wrong person, but actually I just pointed out her mistakes as her supervisor.

You should write "the wrong person" because you are talking about the specific woman at work you made cry.

When seeing her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with athe wrong person, but I had actually I just pointed out her mistakes as a supervisor. When seeing her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with the wrong person, but I had actually just pointed out her mistakes as a supervisor.

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I don't want to see it.


I don't want to see ither cry. I don't want to see her cry.

I don't want to see ither cry. I don't want to see her cry.

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And top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, this kind of the women may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a technique she learned from her life.


And on top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spellcause trouble for my work, this kind of the women may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a tcompany/office because she is using a coping mechaniquesm she learned from her social life. And on top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll cause trouble for my company/office because she is using a coping mechanism she learned from her social life.

"Spell trouble" sounds awkward to me. "Spell doom" is a phrase you might see sometimes but it sounds too dramatic in this case. "Technique" is vague. I don't know what kind of technique. I added "social life" to stess that her crying isn't appropriate in the workplace.

And on top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, this kind of the women may spell further trouble for my work because she usesis using a technique she learned from her life. And on top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, because she is using a technique she learned from her life.

And top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, t. This kind of the womean may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a technique she learned from her life. And top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work. This kind of woman may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a technique she learned from her life.

Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance, unfortunately, it does not work on me, this kind of technique is very tricky to use.


Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance, unfortunately, itme. Unfortunately for her, crying does not work on me, t. This kind of technique is verymanipulation can be tricky to use. Apparently, she wants to take advantage of me. Unfortunately for her, crying does not work on me. This kind of manipulation can be tricky to use.

If you just write "unfortunately," it sounds like you mean "unfortunately for me."

Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance,me, but unfortunately, it doeswill not work on me, t. This kind of technique is very tricsky to use. Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of me, but unfortunately, it will not work. This kind of technique is very risky to use.

Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance, but unfortunately, it does not work on me, t. This kind of technique is very tricky to use. Apparently, she wants to take advantage of the chance, but unfortunately, it does not work on me. This kind of technique is very tricky to use.

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A woman's tears sometimes can go a long way.


A Woman's Trick


Some subordinate women made way too many mistakes.


When seeing her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with a wrong person, but actually I just pointed out her mistakes as a supervisor.


I don't want to see it.


And top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, this kind of the women may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a technique she learned from her life.


Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance, unfortunately, it does not work on me, this kind of technique is very tricky to use.


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