Nov. 19, 2022
A Mosquito
It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming by the end of next month. I live together with my law-in-parents, my law-in-mother removed the mosquito net last Friday. The local temperature is around 15 degrees celsius(I don't know how to input the symbol celsius). But the mosquito never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night.
I prayed as usual hoping mosquitoes only suck blood but not hum around.
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It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming by the end of next month.
It's December already, and the winter solstice will be coming by the end of next month.
i thought "coming by the end of the end" sounded natural to me :,(
I live together with my law-in-parents, my law-in-motherin-laws, my mother-in-law removed thea mosquito nest last Friday.
I live together with my in-laws, my mother-in-law removed a mosquito nest last Friday.
"in-laws" refers to everyone who is a part of your spouse's family - everyone who is your relative-in-law
just saying "in-laws" here most likely means your spouse's parents, but it could also include their siblings. rarely anything beyond that. i just saw that someone else corrected this to say "parents-in-law" and i have never heard somebody say that before :v
also - "the" refers to something specific, but this is the first time you talked about a mosquito nest here, so you just say "a" instead. there's no need to point out a specific one since this is the only one you've talked about.
But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night. But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night.
it can also be spelled "mosquitoes" - both are correct
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i don't usually correct when somebody else has, but i thought i had something different to add. it's probably just regional differences? :v
also man i hate mosquitos!! they're the only animals i'm okay with killing >:(
Nov. 20, 2022
Thank you, you are so kind! I noticed "will be doing" are more popular than "will do" on youtube. And the explanation of "in-laws" is excellent and helpful for me.
Nov. 20, 2022
Thank you, you are so kind! I noticed "will be doing" are more popular than "will do" on youtube. And the explanation of "in-laws" is excellent and helpful for me.
aww thank you!! and yeah, we love the progressive tenses in english haha. although i think the future progressive is slightly less popular than the present progressive. only slighlty!
A Mosquito
It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming byat the end of next month.
It's December already, and the winter solstice will be at the end of next month.
Either: It's December or We are in December
I live (together) with my law-in-parents, my law-in-motherparents-in-law, my mother-in-law removed the mosquito net last Friday.
I live (together) with my parents-in-law, my mother-in-law removed the mosquito net last Friday.
Instead of removed tried: took down, put away
The local temperature is around 15 degrees celsius(I don't know how to input the symbol celsius).
But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night.
But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these disgusting insects hummed all night.
I prayed as usual hoping mosquitoes only suck blood but not hum around.
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Great writing! :)
Nov. 19, 2022
It's happy to see "Great writing!", I will never forget "parents-in-law". Thank you! :))
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It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming by the end of next month.
It's Either: It's December or We are in December
It's i thought "coming by the end of the end" sounded natural to me :,( |
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I live together with my law-in-parents, my law-in-mother removed the mosquito net last Friday.
I live (together) with my Instead of removed tried: took down, put away
I live together with my "in-laws" refers to everyone who is a part of your spouse's family - everyone who is your relative-in-law just saying "in-laws" here most likely means your spouse's parents, but it could also include their siblings. rarely anything beyond that. i just saw that someone else corrected this to say "parents-in-law" and i have never heard somebody say that before :v also - "the" refers to something specific, but this is the first time you talked about a mosquito nest here, so you just say "a" instead. there's no need to point out a specific one since this is the only one you've talked about. |
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The local temperature is around 15 degrees celsius(I don't know how to input the symbol celsius). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But the mosquito never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night.
But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night. But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night. it can also be spelled "mosquitoes" - both are correct |
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