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Tammy

Nov. 23, 2024

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On my way to hike

I am writing this entry on a bus to hike.

This time I go hiking with my friends from a hiking club. They are sleeping right now because we got up early to take the bus.

I just finished my breakfast. I ate half the bread that I made last night. Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need.

Today we are going to see an area where the maple trees are turning red.

I really look forward to enjoying the scenery. Actually I enjoy every single view during hiking because it’s quite relaxing.

I think my English level limits my expressions.

If you want to see the details and pictures of my last hike, you can find some here https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/5TpMtK9Bk4XQILqFz7yKLA

If you cannot open that link up there you can watch the video here https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik

That’s all for tonight.
See you tomorrow.

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Tammy

Nov. 27, 2024

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I ate half the bread that I made last night.

Today we are going to see an area where the maple trees are turning red.

See you tomorrow.

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Tammy

Nov. 24, 2024

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This time I go hiking with my friends from a hiking club.

They are sleeping right now because we got up early to take the bus.

I really look forward to enjoying the scenery.

Actually I enjoy every single view during hiking because it’s quite relaxing.

I think my English level limits my expressions.

See you tomorrow.

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Tammy

Nov. 24, 2024

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Nov. 25, 2024

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They are sleeping right now because we got up early to take the bus.

I just finished my breakfast.

Today we are going to see an area where the maple trees are turning red.

I think my English level limits my expressions.

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Tammy

Nov. 23, 2024

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Tammy

Nov. 23, 2024

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On my way to hike


On my way to hike On my way to hike

On My Way To Hike

On mMy wWay to hHike On My Way to Hike

On my way to a hike On my way to a hike

I am writing this entry on a bus to hike.


I am writing this entry on a bus, which is taking me to a hike/ to a hiking trail. I am writing this entry on a bus, which is taking me to a hike/ to a hiking trail.

I am writing this entry on athe bus ton my way to a hike. I am writing this entry on the bus on my way to a hike.

This time I go hiking with my friends from a hiking club.


This time I'm going hiking with my friends from a hiking club. This time I'm going hiking with my friends from a hiking club.

This time I am goingo hiking with my friends from a hiking club. This time I am going hiking with my friends from a hiking club.

future tense because you are still on the bus and have not started the hike yet, so it's going not go

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This time I’m go hiking with mysome friends from a hiking club. This time I’m going with some friends from a hiking club.

This time I am goingo hiking with my friends from a hiking club. This time I am going hiking with my friends from a hiking club.

I am going would be used instead, because its the present progressive of what you are doing :)

They are sleeping right now because we got up early to take the bus.


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They are asleeping right now because we gohad to get up early to take the bus. They are asleep right now because we had to get up early to take the bus.

I just finished my breakfast.


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I just finished myeating breakfast. I just finished eating breakfast.

I’ve just finished my breakfast. I’ve just finished my breakfast.

Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need.


Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need. Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious bread, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need.

The plural of bread is just bread; some words do that.

Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for mebuttery and so delicious that I always eat more than I neintended. Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious breads, but they are too buttery and so delicious that I always eat more than I intended.

greasy has a negative connotation, meaning that when you describe the bread as greasy, I think of it badly. I would suggest using intend instead of need because you probably didn't need to eat the bread in the first place

Many bakeries near my apartment offerbake very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need. Many bakeries near my apartment bake very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need.

Many bakeries near my apartment offer verysell delicious breads, but theyse are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need. Many bakeries near my apartment sell delicious bread but these are too greasy for me and I always eat more than I need.

If you want to see the details and pictures of my last hike, you can find some here https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/5TpMtK9Bk4XQILqFz7yKLA If you cannot open that link up there you can watch the video here https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik That’s all for tonight.


If you want to see the details and pictures of my last hike, you can find some here https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/5TpMtK9Bk4XQILqFz7yKLA If you cannot open that link up there you can watch the video here https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik That’s all for tonightday. If you want to see the details and pictures of my last hike, you can find some here https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/5TpMtK9Bk4XQILqFz7yKLA If you cannot open that link up there you can watch the video here https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik That’s all for today.

You said you just ate breakfast, how come it's tonight?

I ate half the bread that I made last night.


I ate half of the bread that I made last night. I ate half of the bread that I made last night.

Grammatically, you must add 'of' but if you don't you will still be understood- many natives speak this way

I ate half of the bread that I made last night. I ate half of the bread that I made last night.

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Today we are going to see an area where the maple trees are turning red.


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Today, we are going to see an area where the maple trees are turning red. Today, we are going to see an area where the maple trees are turning red.

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I really look forward to enjoying the scenery.


I am really looking forward to enjoying the scenery. I am really looking forward to the scenery.

Your first sentence still makes sense but is not very natural

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I really look forward to enjoyseeing the scenerym.. I really look forward to seeing them..

Actually I enjoy every single view during hiking because it’s quite relaxing.


Actually, I enjoy every single view during hiking because it’s quite relaxing. Actually, I enjoy every single view during hiking because it’s quite relaxing.

Actually, I enjoy every single view duringwhen I hikinge because it’s quite relaxing. Actually, I enjoy every single view when I hike because it’s quite relaxing.

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Actually, I enjoy every sthingle view during hiking because it’s qu I see when I’m out hiking. I find ite relaxing. Actually, I enjoy everything I see when I’m out hiking. I find it relaxing.

I think my English level limits my expressions.


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I think my English level limits my expressionswhat I can say. I think my English level limits what I can say.

See you tomorrow.


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