kazu's avatar
kazu

May 19, 2020

0
May 11th

I spent time with my girlfriend today too. We both like to see beautiful scenery, go to the countryside and feel nature. But, we can’t do it now because of declaration of a state of emergency to contain infections of COVID19. So, we stay at home,play games on my phone and watch a movie on the Netflix in these days. I wish this epidemic would go away soon and we could hangout outside.

Corrections (4)
Correction Settings
Choose how corrections are organized

Only show inserted text
Word-level diffs are planned for a future update.

kazu's avatar
kazu

May 20, 2020

0

May 11th

May 11th

I wish this epidemic would go away soon and we could hangout outside.

kazu's avatar
kazu

May 20, 2020

0

May 11th

kazu's avatar
kazu

May 20, 2020

0

May 11th


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I spent time with my girlfriend today too.


I spent time with my girlfriend today tooas well. I spent time with my girlfriend today as well.

sounds nicer to say "as well" here

I spent time with my girlfriend today (too). I spent time with my girlfriend today (too).

Your sentence is grammatically correct, but generally, people only put "too" when they're responding to someone who's done the same thing. An example could be: - A: "I played basketball today." - B: "I played basketball today, too!"

I spent time with my girlfriend today too. I spent time with my girlfriend today.

We both like to see beautiful scenery, go to the countryside and feel nature.


We both like to see beautiful scenery, to go to the countryside and to feel nature. We both like to see beautiful scenery, to go to the countryside and to feel nature.

We both like to see beautiful scenery, go to the countryside, and feelimmerse ourselves in nature. We both like to see beautiful scenery, go to the countryside, and immerse ourselves in nature.

"Feel nature" sounds a bit weird in this context. Generally, when using "feel", English speakers associate the word with physically touching something or feeling an emotion. "Immerse ourselves" is another, more specific way of saying "feel" that's applicable in this context.

We both like to sewatch/observe beautiful sceneryies, go to the countryside and feel nature. We both like to watch/observe beautiful sceneries, go to the countryside and feel nature.

But, we can’t do it now because of declaration of a state of emergency to contain infections of COVID19.


But, we can’t do it now because of the declaration of a state of emergency to contain infections of COVID-19. But, we can’t do it now because of the declaration of a state of emergency to contain infections of COVID-19.

But, we can’t do it now because of declaration of a state of emergency declaration to contain infections of COVID-19. But we can’t do it now because of a state of emergency declaration to contain infections of COVID-19.

But, we can’t do it now because of the declaration of a sState of eEmergency to contain infections due tof COVID19. But, we can’t do it now because of the declaration of a State of Emergency to contain infections due to COVID19.

So, we stay at home,play games on my phone and watch a movie on the Netflix in these days.


So, we stay at home, play games on my phone, and watch a movie on the Netflix during these daysis time. So, we stay at home, play games on my phone, and watch a movie on the Netflix during this time.

So, we stay at home, play games on my phone, and watch a movie on the Netflix in these days. So, we stay at home, play games on my phone, and watch a movie on Netflix in these days.

Since Netflix is a specific company/app, you don't need to put "the" in front of it.

So, these days we stay at home, play games on my phone and watch a movies on the Netflix in these days. So these days we stay at home, play games on my phone and watch movies on Netflix.

I wish this epidemic would go away soon and we could hangout outside.


I wish this epidemic wouldill go away soon, and that we could hang out outside. I wish this epidemic will go away soon, and that we could hang out outside.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wish this epidemic wouldto go away soon andso that we couldan hangout outside. I wish this epidemic to go away soon so that we can hangout outside.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium