Feb. 1, 2022
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's things.
When I have an envy of some things, I can act between positive or negative way.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.
If I admire it, the positive mind makes me better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect.
However, keeping peaceful mind, I need to do more positive way.
Jealousy, Envy and Respect
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to gewhat other's thingshave.
Envy is a kind of instinct that I want what others have.
When I have an envy of some thingsexperience envy, I can act between positively or negative waly.
When I experience envy, I can act positively or negatively.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makedestroys my mind destroy.
If I get jealous, the negative act destroys my mind.
If I admire it, the positive mindset makes me feel better. If I admire it, the positive mindset makes me feel better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to and to instead have respect.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous and to instead have respect.
However,To keeping a peaceful mind, I need to dothink in a more positive way.
To keep a peaceful mind, I need to think in a more positive way.
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Great writing! :)
Jealousy, Envy and Respect
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinctfeeling that I want to get other'possess other peoples things.
Envy is a kind of feeling that I want to possess other peoples things.
When I have an envy of some things, I can act betweeneither in a positive or negative way.
When I envy some things, I can act either in a positive or negative way.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.destroys my mind.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act destroys my mind.
If I admire it, the positive mindact makes mey mind better.
If I admire it, the positive act makes my mind better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, butand to respect.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, and to respect.
However, to keeping peaceful a calm mind, I need to doact in a more positive way.
However, to keep a calm mind, I need to act in a more positive way.
Jealousy, Envy and Respect
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's thingsfeeling that occurs when I want the things other people have.
Envy is a kind of feeling that occurs when I want the things other people have.
You could use "feeling" or "emotion" here. "Instinct" is used more often when the reaction is unconscious and happens quickly, or when you have a gut feeling about a situation.
When I have an envyget envious of some things, I can act between positive oreither react in a positive way, or in a negative way.
When I get envious of some things, I can either react in a positive way, or in a negative way.
"To get envious" or "to be envious" is the passive form of "to envy" in English.
Also, I added "in a positive way" / "in a negative way" to provide more clarity to the sentence.
If I get jealous about itsomething, the negative act finally makes my mind destroycan destroy my mind.
If I get jealous about something, the negative act can destroy my mind.
You should "something" rather than "it" as a pronoun here, because you aren't talking about a specific item you are jealous of. You're talking about the concept of being jealous.
If I admire itsomething, the positive mindset makes me better.
If I admire something, the positive mindset makes me better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect instead. Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect instead.
However, in order to keeping a peaceful mindset, I need to do more positive waythinking, like admiration.
However, in order to keep a peaceful mindset, I need to do more positive thinking, like admiration.
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Envy is a kind of instinct that Iemotion that arises when you want to gethave other's things.
Envy is a kind of emotion that arises when you want to have other's things.
When I have an envy'm envious of some things, I can act betweenin a positive or a negative way.
When I'm envious of some things, I can act in a positive or a negative way.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroyemotion takes over my mind.
If I get jealous about it, the negative emotion takes over my mind.
If I admire it, the positive mindfeelings makes me feel better.
If I admire it, the positive feelings make me feel better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respectto respect something, instead of becoming jealous.
Actually, it is very hard to respect something, instead of becoming jealous.
However, to keeping a peaceful mind, I need to do more things in a positive way.
However, to keep a peaceful mind, I need to do more things in a positive way.
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Well done :)
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Envy is a kind of feeling that makes you want to have other people's things.
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If I admire it, the positivity mind makes me feel better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect it. Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect it.
"but to respect" feels like there is another part to the sentence, it ends too soon.
However, to keeping a peaceful mind, I need to dobe more positive way.
However, to keep a peaceful mind, I need to be more positive.
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