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Hi,. I don't know what to write here but maybe something about my day. Hi. I don't know what to write here but maybe something about my day.

Hi,. I don't know what to write about here, but maybe I will write something about my day. Hi. I don't know what to write about here, but maybe I will write something about my day.

I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, eate my breakfast and gowent to work. I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, ate my breakfast and went to work.

Everything needs to be in the same tense here. You started in the past and then used the present.

I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, eat mye breakfast and gowent to work. I woke up at 7:30am, brushed my hair, ate breakfast and went to work.

More natural English like this.

I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, eate my breakfast and gownet to work. I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, ate my breakfast and wnet to work.

It was raining almost allrained most of the day. It rained most of the day.

More natural sounding.

It was raining almost all day. It was raining all day.

In myAt work I was doing my basic administration thingasks like a working with documentaries. At work I was doing basic administration tasks like working with documents.

Do you mean 'documents' working with documentaries does not seem like basic admin.

In myAt work I was doing my basic administration things like a working with documentariesdo administration for a documentary production company. At work I do administration for a documentary production company.

Sounds better. All administration is "basic" so you don't really need that.

In myAt work, I was doing my basic administration things like a working with documentarieswork . At work, I was doing my basic administration work .

After work I came back to home and learningstudied my courses for 2 hours and eate with my boyfriend. After work I came back home and studied my courses for 2 hours and ate with my boyfriend.

Needs to be all in past tense not a mixture.

ABack home after work I came back to home and learning my courses for 2hours and eatspent 2 hours learning my coursework before dinner with my boyfriend. Back home after work I spent 2 hours learning my coursework before dinner with my boyfriend.

Sounds better.

After work, I camewent back to home and was learning with my courses for 2two hours and e. I ate with my boyfriend. After work, I went back to home and was learning with my courses for two hours. I ate with my boyfriend.