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My morning routine
I usually wake up at around 5:00.
I go to the park and enjoy walking.
Unfortunately, it was rainy this morning, but I had an umbrella.
I usually walk for around 30 minutes.
There are a few seniors in the park.
They look healthy. They have nice habits!
I often listen to Radio Nikkei, but on clear days, I like listening to nature sounds like singing birds.
I love nature. There are flowers, a pond, and trees. The irises are blooming; they are so beautiful.
My socks were getting wetter and wetter.
It was disgusting!
The rain was getting heavy, so I headed home.
I took a shower because I was so cold.
And now, I have finished writing this.
私は大体朝5時に起きます。
公園に行って、散歩を楽しみます。
残念ながら、今朝は雨が降っていましたが、私は傘を持っていました。
私はよく30分ほど歩きます。
老公たちが公園にいました
彼らは健康に見えます。いい習慣を持っています。
ラジオ日経をよく聞きますが、晴れている日は、鳥の声のような自然の音を聞くのが好きです。
自然が好きです。ここには花、池、そして木々があります。アヤメが咲いていて、とても綺麗でした。
靴下がどんどん濡れてきました。
とても不快です。
雨も強くなってきたので、家に帰りました。
寒かったので、シャワーを浴びました
そして、今これを書き終わりました。
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My morning routine
I usually wake up at around 5:00.
I go to the park and enjoy a morning walking.
I go to the park and enjoy a morning walk.
Japanese people often use the word "to enjoy" (like 楽しむ, right?), but it isn't super common or natural in English. I would probably say "I have a nice little walk in the park" or something to show the same meaning. But I didn't want to change your sentence too much.
Unfortunately, it was rainy this morning, but I had an umbrella.
I usually walk for around 30 minutes.
There are (always/usually) a few seniors in the park. There are (always/usually) a few seniors in the park.
They look healthy.
They have nicegood habits!
They have good habits!
You usually use "good" or "bad" for habits because it's a judgement.
I often listen to Radio Nikkei, but on clear days, I like listening to nature sounds like singing birds.
I love nature.
There are flowers, a pond, and trees at the park. There are flowers, a pond, and trees at the park.
The irises are blooming; they are so beautiful.
My socks were getting wetter and wetter. My socks were getting wetter and wetter.
The grammar is correct, but the tenses changing is a bit confusing. I'm not sure how to correct it, because past tense is correct to talk about your walk today, but if you're talking about your walks in general, present tense is correct. Maybe put the two different topics in separate paragraphs, so you aren't switching tense back and forth?
It was disgusting!
The rain was getting heavy, so I headed home.
I took a shower because I was so cold.
And now, I have finished writing this.
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Good writing! I don't think I could wake up that early without having a heart attack haha.
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I go to the park and enjoy walking.
I go to the park and enjoy a morning walk Japanese people often use the word "to enjoy" (like 楽しむ, right?), but it isn't super common or natural in English. I would probably say "I have a nice little walk in the park" or something to show the same meaning. But I didn't want to change your sentence too much. |
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Unfortunately, it was rainy this morning, but I had an umbrella. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I usually walk for around 30 minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are a few seniors in the park. There are (always/usually) a few seniors in the park. There are (always/usually) a few seniors in the park. |
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They look healthy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They have nice habits!
They have You usually use "good" or "bad" for habits because it's a judgement. |
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I often listen to Radio Nikkei, but on clear days, I like listening to nature sounds like singing birds. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love nature. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are flowers, a pond, and trees. There are flowers, a pond, and trees at the park. There are flowers, a pond, and trees at the park. |
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The irises are blooming; they are so beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My socks were getting wetter and wetter. My socks were getting wetter and wetter. My socks were getting wetter and wetter. The grammar is correct, but the tenses changing is a bit confusing. I'm not sure how to correct it, because past tense is correct to talk about your walk today, but if you're talking about your walks in general, present tense is correct. Maybe put the two different topics in separate paragraphs, so you aren't switching tense back and forth? |
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It was disgusting! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The rain was getting heavy, so I headed home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I took a shower because I was so cold. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And now, I have finished writing this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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