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andrea

July 28, 2021

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Drug legalization.

After decades of death, corruption, wars, and spend a lot of resources for stopping this problem, without good results. We should take our time and think, if we are making the correct decisions for affront the situation.

Some experts in the topic affirm that the best way for solve this problem is the legalization. They argument that the legalization break the main reason of profitability in illegal organizations, also it make possible that government built laws ans structure of production less destructive for people, like, industries of tobacco or alcohol.

On the other hand, other experts are fearful of the legalization. They argument that the possibility of growing up addictions and behave problems are high, due to price, access and normalization of these products, without a social conscience of how manage these kind of products and their effect in their life. Moreover, they think that illegal organizations just change of product or objective and keep their bad effect in the society but with other profile.

In conclusion, this is a topic that needs a lot of investigation and socialization for figuring out what is the best for the society and its future

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Drug lThe Legalization. of Drugs

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, and adverbs is capitalized in the title.

After decades of death, corruption, wars, and spend aing lots of resources fortrying to stopping this problem, without good results, we should take our time and think about whether or not we're taking the right steps.

These two sentences need to be combined into a compound sentence, as although the following sentence was a complete sentence, this one wasn't.

We should take our time and think, if we are making the correct decisions for affront the situation.

Some experts ion the topic affirmhave concluded that the best way forto solve this problem is their legalization.

Theyir argument is that the legalization break the main reason of profitability in illegal organizations, also itof drugs takes away illegal organizations' main source of profit, and it also makes possible that government built laws ans structure of productionlaws that control the production of the substances and make them less destructive for people, like, the industries of tobacco or alcohol.

On the other hand, other experts are fearful of thedrugs' legalization.

They argumente that the possibility of growing up addictions and behaveior problems are high, due to price, accessibility and normalization of these products, without aespecially as there is no social conscienceensus ofn how manage these kinds of products and their effect in their lifes on peoples' lives.

Moreover, they think that illegal organizations will just change oftheir product or objective, and keep their bad effect in thecontinue to hurt society, but with under another profile.

In conclusion, this is a topic that needs a lot of investigation and socialization forresearch and discussion in order to figuringe out what is the best for thething for society and itsfor the future

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andrea

July 28, 2021

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Thank you.

Drug legalization.


Drug lThe Legalization. of Drugs

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, and adverbs is capitalized in the title.

After decades of death, corruption, wars, and spend a lot of resources for stopping this problem, without good results.


After decades of death, corruption, wars, and spend aing lots of resources fortrying to stopping this problem, without good results, we should take our time and think about whether or not we're taking the right steps.

These two sentences need to be combined into a compound sentence, as although the following sentence was a complete sentence, this one wasn't.

We should take our time and think, if we are making the correct decisions for affront the situation.


We should take our time and think, if we are making the correct decisions for affront the situation.

Some experts in the topic affirm that the best way for solve this problem is the legalization.


Some experts ion the topic affirmhave concluded that the best way forto solve this problem is their legalization.

They argument that the legalization break the main reason of profitability in illegal organizations, also it make possible that government built laws ans structure of production less destructive for people, like, industries of tobacco or alcohol.


Theyir argument is that the legalization break the main reason of profitability in illegal organizations, also itof drugs takes away illegal organizations' main source of profit, and it also makes possible that government built laws ans structure of productionlaws that control the production of the substances and make them less destructive for people, like, the industries of tobacco or alcohol.

On the other hand, other experts are fearful of the legalization.


On the other hand, other experts are fearful of thedrugs' legalization.

They argument that the possibility of growing up addictions and behave problems are high, due to price, access and normalization of these products, without a social conscience of how manage these kind of products and their effect in their life.


They argumente that the possibility of growing up addictions and behaveior problems are high, due to price, accessibility and normalization of these products, without aespecially as there is no social conscienceensus ofn how manage these kinds of products and their effect in their lifes on peoples' lives.

Moreover, they think that illegal organizations just change of product or objective and keep their bad effect in the society but with other profile.


Moreover, they think that illegal organizations will just change oftheir product or objective, and keep their bad effect in thecontinue to hurt society, but with under another profile.

In conclusion, this is a topic that needs a lot of investigation and socialization for figuring out what is the best for the society and its future


In conclusion, this is a topic that needs a lot of investigation and socialization forresearch and discussion in order to figuringe out what is the best for thething for society and itsfor the future

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