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Indian society structure is difference.

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From the West to the East, history is the best teacher to show authorities how to build a regime, make the society auto-work well, and depress uprisings. It directly shows a principle; violence is the significant element, as a footstone when a new regime is forming. But the interesting situation is this principle is not the answer in every country, especially in India. Even now, India still confronts a basket of social issues, such as a deep-set caste system, a reeled regime, and growing religious conflicts. Compared with China, which is the same as one of the countries of four ancient civilizations, India cut its development path. Some historians suggest the doomed failure of India’s development because it had taken its foot in the wrong step at the beginning. The rising of India is based on Vedas, which is the oldest scripture in the world and is the cornerstone of sharpening Indian society. In other words, India is born in religion, not violence. And that is the huge difference with other countries, that religion power is great. In the short term, religion plays a good role in India, which could reduce the conflicts between tribes, keep society stable, and bring a short-term boom. But in the long-term, it is incrementally toxic India; When the hierarchy is formidable entrenching, the society will turn to bust and lose vigor. China did a good job in this realm which completely separated religions and politics. If some want to make India great again, unity is the key, and then religion will be one of the inevitable roadblocks on the path.

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Indian society structure is difference.


Indian society structure is difference.The structure of Indian society is unique The structure of Indian society is unique

You could also say, "The structure of Indian society is different than...[that of Western countries, than China, etc.]" but you would need to specify what you're comparing it to.

From the West to the East, history is the best teacher to show authorities how to build a regime, make the society auto-work well, and depress uprisings.


From the West to the East, history is the best teacher to showwhen it comes to showing government authorities how to build a regimstate, make the society auto-work well, and depressrun smoothly, and discourage uprisings. From the West to the East, history is the best teacher when it comes to showing government authorities how to build a state, make society run smoothly, and discourage uprisings.

The phrase "show authorities how to build a regime" has a strongly totalitarian feel. The way I've reworded it is more neutral, but I'm not certain if your original subtext was intentional or not. My apologies if it was and I've now changed it! In addition, "auto-work" is not a phrase in English, so I took my best guess at correcting it.

It directly shows a principle; violence is the significant element, as a footstone when a new regime is forming.


ItHistory directly shows ademonstrates the following principle;: that violence is the significant element, as a footstone when a new regime is formingfoundation of new government systems. History directly demonstrates the following principle: that violence is the foundation of new government systems.

But the interesting situation is this principle is not the answer in every country, especially in India.


But theit is interesting situation isto note that this principle idoes not the answerhold true in every country, especially in India. But it is interesting to note that this principle does not hold true in every country, especially in India.

Even now, India still confronts a basket of social issues, such as a deep-set caste system, a reeled regime, and growing religious conflicts.


Even now, India still confronts a basketrange of social issues, such asincluding a deep-set caste system, a reeledfaltering regime, and growing religious conflicts. Even now, India confronts a range of social issues, including a deep-set caste system, a faltering regime, and growing religious conflicts.

I wasn't sure what you meant by "reeled regime," so this is my best guess but it may not match what you're trying to say.

Compared with China, which is the same as one of the countries of four ancient civilizations, India cut its development path.


Compared with China, which is the same aslikewise one of the countries of four ancient civilizations, India cutondensed its development path. Compared with China, which is likewise one of the four ancient civilizations, India condensed its development path.

I'm not 100% sure what you mean by "cut its development path" - do you mean it was shorter than China's?

Some historians suggest the doomed failure of India’s development because it had taken its foot in the wrong step at the beginning.


Some historians suggest the doomed failure ofat India’s development because it had taken its foot in the wrong step at the beginningis doomed to failure because it started on the wrong foot. Some historians suggest that India’s development is doomed to failure because it started on the wrong foot.

The rising of India is based on Vedas, which is the oldest scripture in the world and is the cornerstone of sharpening Indian society.


The risinge of India is based on the Vedas, which isare the oldest scriptures in the world and is the cornerstone of sharpenan ever-improving Indian society. The rise of India is based on the Vedas, which are the oldest scriptures in the world and the cornerstone of an ever-improving Indian society.

In other words, India is born in religion, not violence.


In other words, India iwas born in religion, not violence. In other words, India was born in religion, not violence.

And that is the huge difference with other countries, that religion power is great.


And that is the hugebig difference withbetween India and other countries,: that religionus power is greatdifferent than the power of violence. And that is the big difference between India and other countries: that religious power is different than the power of violence.

In the short term, religion plays a good role in India, which could reduce the conflicts between tribes, keep society stable, and bring a short-term boom.


In the short term, religion plays a good role in India, which and could reduce the conflicts between tribes, keep society stable, and bring a short-term boom. In the short term, religion plays a good role in India and could reduce the conflicts between tribes, keep society stable, and bring a short-term boom.

But in the long-term, it is incrementally toxic India; When the hierarchy is formidable entrenching, the society will turn to bust and lose vigor.


But in the long- term, it is incrementalreligion will be progressively toxic to India;. When the religious hierarchy is formidable entrenching, the society will turn to bust and lose vigorcompletely entrenched, Indian society will decline and lose its robustness. But in the long term, religion will be progressively toxic to India. When the religious hierarchy is completely entrenched, Indian society will decline and lose its robustness.

China did a good job in this realm which completely separated religions and politics.


China did a good job in this arealm which by completely separateding religions and politics. China did a good job in this area by completely separating religion and politics.

If some want to make India great again, unity is the key, and then religion will be one of the inevitable roadblocks on the path.


If somone wants to make India great again, unity is the key, and then religion will be one of the inevitable roadblocks on the patha roadblock. If one wants to make India great again, unity is the key, and then religion will be a roadblock.

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