Jan. 6, 2021
Translation Practice
In 2021, I want to get rid of the dependence on computers and phones. I think I am addicted to computers and phones-I watch screens all day long. This bad habit is very harmful to people’s lives.
On the one hand, computers and phones have bad effects on people’s physiological health. The light from both the computer screen and phones not only hurts your eyes but also affects your sleep. Moreover, if you listen to music for too long using headphones, it will lead you deaf. (I have listened to music for too long at one time)
On the other hand, playing on the phone wastes a lot of time. For me, because I spend too much time on the phone, I don’t have time to do other activities or do other hobbies.
In addition, people who are addicted to computers or phones have a bad affect on their mental health. If I spend less time playing on the computer or phone, I will be happier and more healthy.
But it’s difficult to get rid of this bad habit. It seems there are two reasons: first. Computers are necessary because you have to use them for work. I need to use a computer to do my homework and also use the computer and phone to study Chinese.
So I am not able to avoid the computer because I have to work by using it. This way, when I work, it is so easy to open a new window to seek a funny video or a liked song, so it is also easy to do things that are not related to my work.
Second, many people see the computer as a communication tool. Especially in the pandemic, we use technical devices to keep relationships.
I use the internet to keep relationships with friends that are faraway, and when I feel lonely I use the internet as friends. What I am afraid of is that I will feel lonely if I am offline.
But I think, by getting rid of the dependence on computers, I am able to make friends in reality and develop practical relationships.
From tomorrow on, I will try to reduce the time of using a computer and phone, at least take a little time from using them. I am looking forward to seeing what affects the new habit will bring.
Correction Settings
In 2021, I want to get rid of themy dependence on computers and phones.
In 2021, I want to get rid of my dependence on computers and phones.
I think I am addicted to computers and phones-I watch; I look at screens all day long.
I think I am addicted to computers and phones; I look at screens all day long.
On the one handFirst, computers and phones have bad effects on people’s physiological health.
First, computers and phones have bad effects on people’s physiological health.
"On one hand" is a sentence people use to contrast two different things. So the thing on one hand has to be different to the other. You might say, On one hand, screens are helpful in communicating, but on the other hand, they are bad for your eyes. But because both your examples with "on one hand" are talking about bad things, you shouldn't use this phrase.
The light from both the computer screens and phones not only hurts your eyes but also affects your sleep.
The light from both computer screens and phones not only hurts your eyes but also affects your sleep.
Moreover, if you listen to music for too long using headphones, it will leadmake you deaf.
Moreover, if you listen to music for too long using headphones, it will make you deaf.
(I have listedoned to music for too long at one timehat before.)
(I have done that before.)
On the other handAdditionally, playing on theyour phone wastes a lot of time.
Additionally, playing on your phone wastes a lot of time.
For me, because I spend too much time on themy phone, I don’t have time to do other activities or do other hobbies.
For me, because I spend too much time on my phone, I don’t have time to do other activities or other hobbies.
In addition, people who are addicted to computers or phones have awill see bad aeffects on their mental health.
In addition, people who are addicted to computers or phones will see bad effects on their mental health.
It seems there are two reasons: first.
It seems there are two reasons:
CFirst, computers are necessary because you have to use them for work.
First, computers are necessary because you have to use them for work.
So I am not able to avoid the computer because I haveneed it to work by using it.
So I am not able to avoid the computer because I need it to work.
This wayHowever, when I work, it is stoo easy to open a new window to seekfind a funny video or a likedfavourite song, so it is also easy to do things that are not related to my work.
However, when I work, it is too easy to open a new window to find a funny video or a favourite song, so it is also easy to do things that are not related to my work.
Especially in the pandemic, we use technical devices to keepmaintain relationships.
Especially in the pandemic, we use technical devices to maintain relationships.
I use the internet to keepmaintain relationships with friends that are faraway, and when I feel lonely I use the internet as friends.
I use the internet to maintain relationships with friends that are faraway, and when I feel lonely I use the internet as friends.
But I think, by getting rid of the dependence on computers, I amwould be able to make friends in reality and develop practical relationships.
But I think, by getting rid of the dependence on computers, I would be able to make friends in reality and develop practical relationships.
From tomorrow on, I will try to reduce the time ofI spend using a computer andor phone, at least take a little time from using them.
From tomorrow on, I will try to reduce the time I spend using a computer or phone, at least take a little.
I am looking forward to seeing what aeffects theis new habit will bring.
I am looking forward to seeing what effects this new habit will bring.
Feedback
Try to avoid using "the" too much. "The" is mostly only used when there is only one object, and usually only if that object is important. Things like your phone, should be referred to as "my phone" instead of "the phone" instead.
Jan. 6, 2021
Thank you very much.
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On the other hand, playing on the phone wastes a lot of time.
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Translation Practice |
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In 2021, I want to get rid of the dependence on computers and phones.
In 2021, I want to get rid of |
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I think I am addicted to computers and phones-I watch screens all day long.
I think I am addicted to computers and phones |
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This bad habit is very harmful to people’s lives. |
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On the one hand, computers and phones have bad effects on people’s physiological health.
"On one hand" is a sentence people use to contrast two different things. So the thing on one hand has to be different to the other. You might say, On one hand, screens are helpful in communicating, but on the other hand, they are bad for your eyes. But because both your examples with "on one hand" are talking about bad things, you shouldn't use this phrase. |
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The light from both the computer screen and phones not only hurts your eyes but also affects your sleep.
The light from both |
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Moreover, if you listen to music for too long using headphones, it will lead you deaf.
Moreover, if you listen to music for too long using headphones, it will |
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(I have listened to music for too long at one time)
(I have |
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For me, because I spend too much time on the phone, I don’t have time to do other activities or do other hobbies.
For me, because I spend too much time on |
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In addition, people who are addicted to computers or phones have a bad affect on their mental health.
In addition, people who are addicted to computers or phones |
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If I spend less time playing on the computer or phone, I will be happier and more healthy. |
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But it’s difficult to get rid of this bad habit. |
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It seems there are two reasons: first.
It seems there are two reasons: |
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Computers are necessary because you have to use them for work.
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I need to use a computer to do my homework and also use the computer and phone to study Chinese. |
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So I am not able to avoid the computer because I have to work by using it.
So I am not able to avoid the computer because I |
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This way, when I work, it is so easy to open a new window to seek a funny video or a liked song, so it is also easy to do things that are not related to my work.
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Second, many people see the computer as a communication tool. |
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Especially in the pandemic, we use technical devices to keep relationships.
Especially in the pandemic, we use technical devices to |
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I use the internet to keep relationships with friends that are faraway, and when I feel lonely I use the internet as friends.
I use the internet to |
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What I am afraid of is that I will feel lonely if I am offline. |
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But I think, by getting rid of the dependence on computers, I am able to make friends in reality and develop practical relationships.
But I think, by getting rid of the dependence on computers, I |
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From tomorrow on, I will try to reduce the time of using a computer and phone, at least take a little time from using them.
From tomorrow on, I will try to reduce the time |
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I am looking forward to seeing what affects the new habit will bring.
I am looking forward to seeing what |
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