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Koheisan

Nov. 4, 2025

5
Driving A Car

I woke up at 6 o’clock this morning.
I usually get up early on Tuesday and Thursday.
Because I should go to another prefecture by a car for my work.
It makes me unhappy.
It’s sure that driving is good.
But I want to sleep more, and 50km driving at early morning is little bit tough.
And often I straggle traffic jam.
To change my mind, I drive a car with podcasts , radio or music.
What are you doing when you are driving?

Corrections

Driving Athe Car

Since you're referring to a specific car it's probably best to use "the".
In titles "the" often is not capitalised.

I woke up at 6 o’clock this morning.

I usually get up early on Tuesdays and Thursdays.

It's not really wrong to write these singular, but it's probably more correct to pluralise them.

Because I shouldhave to go to another prefecture by a car for my workjob.

"should" here gives the impression that this is optional but recommended. It seems more likely to me that this is something you have to do.

It makes me unhappy.

It’s sure that'm fine with driving is good.tself.

Taking a guess at what you meant here, the sentence unfortunately doesn't make much sense to me.
言いたい事は何ですか?

But I want to sleep more, and 50km driving at50km early in the morning is little bit tough.

And often I straggleget stuck in traffic jams.

You could also say "I struggle with traffic jams"

TIn order to change my mind, I drive athe car withhile listening to podcasts , the radio, or music.

The first part about changing your mind doesn't feel like it fits this sentence
言いたい事は何ですか?

What aredo you doing when you are drivinge?

Best to keep the tense simple here.

Feedback

Good writing! Keep it up!
I like to listen to music while I drive, but I also listen to podcasts from time to time.

Koheisan's avatar
Koheisan

yesterday

5

Thank you a lot!
Your revised phrases are OK. It's the thing what I want to say.
I really want to write simple phrases, but I can't now.
Your feedback is very grateful!

Driving A Car

I woke up at 6 o'clock this morning.

I usually get up early on Tuesday and Thursday.

Because I should goThis is because I have to drive a car to another prefecture by a car for my workjob.

It makes me unhappy.

It’s 'm sure that driving is good.

But, I want to sleep more, and 50km driving at early morning isfor 50 km is a little bit tough.

AndI often I strauggle with traffic jams, too.

To changekeep my mind, I drive a car with engaged, I listen to podcasts , radio shows or music while driving.

Slightly more natural rephrasing.

What aredo you doing when while you are driving?

"while" indicates that it's something that you're doing, or is happening, at the same time as your driving.

Feedback

Some rephrasing needed, but still pretty good! Personally, I commute, but I understand the struggle.

Koheisan's avatar
Koheisan

yesterday

5

Thank you.
Actually, I thought that "should" and "have to" are same means.
I want to know that those differences of nuance.
Could you teach me?

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arcstorm

yesterday

1

"should" implies you're (often willingly!) doing it based on someone's advice or recommendation; "have to" implies you are doing it because it is being imposed on you, and you don't (often) have a choice. In this specific case, you're driving because it's imposed by your job.

Koheisan's avatar
Koheisan

yesterday

5

Grate! Thanks!
I see!
It becomes clearly!

Driving A Car


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Driving Athe Car

Since you're referring to a specific car it's probably best to use "the". In titles "the" often is not capitalised.

I woke up at 6 o’clock this morning.


I woke up at 6 o'clock this morning.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually get up early on Tuesday and Thursday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually get up early on Tuesdays and Thursdays.

It's not really wrong to write these singular, but it's probably more correct to pluralise them.

Because I should go to another prefecture by a car for my work.


Because I should goThis is because I have to drive a car to another prefecture by a car for my workjob.

Because I shouldhave to go to another prefecture by a car for my workjob.

"should" here gives the impression that this is optional but recommended. It seems more likely to me that this is something you have to do.

It makes me unhappy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s sure that driving is good.


It’s 'm sure that driving is good.

It’s sure that'm fine with driving is good.tself.

Taking a guess at what you meant here, the sentence unfortunately doesn't make much sense to me. 言いたい事は何ですか?

But I want to sleep more, and 50km driving at early morning is little bit tough.


But, I want to sleep more, and 50km driving at early morning isfor 50 km is a little bit tough.

But I want to sleep more, and 50km driving at50km early in the morning is little bit tough.

And often I straggle traffic jam.


AndI often I strauggle with traffic jams, too.

And often I straggleget stuck in traffic jams.

You could also say "I struggle with traffic jams"

To change my mind, I drive a car with podcasts , radio or music.


To changekeep my mind, I drive a car with engaged, I listen to podcasts , radio shows or music while driving.

Slightly more natural rephrasing.

TIn order to change my mind, I drive athe car withhile listening to podcasts , the radio, or music.

The first part about changing your mind doesn't feel like it fits this sentence 言いたい事は何ですか?

What are you doing when you are driving?


What aredo you doing when while you are driving?

"while" indicates that it's something that you're doing, or is happening, at the same time as your driving.

What aredo you doing when you are drivinge?

Best to keep the tense simple here.

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