I'm trying to renew my driver’s license, how. Because my father is an expert doing allin this, he is accompanying me.

We went toI completed my medical exams first,. I passed all of them perfectly, but Iit was a bit strange because they didn't evaluate my reaction time.

Thisat is the most important exam, I think.

I needed to schedule an appointment online, but my father didn't know about it.

The website is fall down yetstill not working (?).

No hay sentido

So, I think today will not be the day to have my newget my drivers license.

Driver's License Renewal

We say "Driver's license"

I'm trying to renew my driver's license, how my father is an expert doing all this,at driving so he is accompanying me.

"My father is an expert at this' implies he's an expert at renewing driver's licenses, which I don't think you meant that.

We went todid my medical exams first, I passed all of them perfectly, but Iit was a bit strange because they didn't evaluate my reaction time.

Most of this was changed to sound more natural, but the word "evalue" doesn't exist and you should use "it' instead of "I", since you're referring to the exams, not yourself.

The website is fall down yet.

not sure what this means

So, I think today will not be the day to havedon't think I'll get my new driver's license today.

This sounds more natural

Driver's License Renewal

I'm trying to renew my driver's license, howand as (or because) my father is an expert doing all thisat driving, he is accompanying me.

We went to mydo the medical exams first,. I passed all perfect, but Iit was a bit strange because they didn't evalueate ("test" is better) my reaction time.

This is the most important exam, I think.

I think that should be the most important exam.

Maybe a better way of putting it. Sounds more natural.

The website is fall down yet.

Not sure what this means exactly. Maybe "The website is offline"?

So, I think today will not be the day to have my newI get my driver's license.

"new" driver's license would mean you have had a driver's license in the past, but you're getting a new one.
Still fine to say it like that, though it could be a bit confusing to understand to some.

I'm trying to renew my driver license, how. Since my father is an expert at doing all this, he iswill be accompanying me.

We went to my medical exams first,. I passed alleverything perfectly, but I was a bit strangeconfused because they didn't evaluate my reaction time.

I needed to schedule an appointment online, butwhich my father didn't know about it.

The website is fallhasn't been taken down yet.

hasn't crashed