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SummerTeaWater

March 29, 2022

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Drinking Milk

Recently, I drink milk every morning for my health.

Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it.

One day, I saw a blog posting that a man tasted a lot of milk made by foreign nations.

He said Australian milk was good for him.

I was also curious about other milk, so I started trying to buy them.

Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk becomes one of my daily routine.

Anyway, the milk is definitely tasty for me.

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Drinking Milk

Recently, I have been drinking milk every morning for my health.

Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it before.

One day, I saw a blog posting that where a man tasted a lots of different kinds of milk made by foreign nations.

He said Australian milk was good for him.

I was also curious about other types of milk, so I started trying to buy them.

Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk becomes onepart of my daily routine.

Anyway, theI think milk is definitely tasty for me.

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Good writing! I agree, milk is so tasty :p

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SummerTeaWater

March 30, 2022

402

Thank you very much :)

Recently, I have been drinking milk every morning for my health.

I drink is ok, "I have been" is more natural, this tense is really confusing though :)

Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it at first.

He said Australian milk was good for him.

did he mean it was best for his health or that it tasted the best? it's a bit confusing in the context

I was also curious about other types of milk, so I started trying to buy them.

Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk becoames one of my daily routines.

Anyway, the milk is definitely tasty for me.

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SummerTeaWater

March 30, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Recently, I have been drinking milk every morning for my health.

Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it.

If you wanted to show that this unwillingness was only temporary, you could try something like this:

"At first, I was unwilling to drink it because of the calories in it."

One day, I saw a blog posting that where a man tasted a lot of milk made byin foreign nations.

Or: "I saw a blog post in which a man tasted a lot of milk..." which is slightly more formal.
Or: "I saw a blog post about a man who tasted a lot of milk..." if the author of the blog post is not the man who is tasting all this milk.

"Different countries" is a less formal-sounding alternative to "foreign nations."

He said Australian milk was good for him.

Do you mean that the Australian milk tasted good to him?

Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk has becomes one part of my daily routine.

Anyways, the milk is definitely tasty forto me.

It's unclear whether you mean that all milk is tasty to you - in which case, you can leave out "the" - "Anyways, milk is definitely tasty to me."

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Are you still concerned about the milk's caloric content?

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SummerTeaWater

March 30, 2022

402

Thank you for corrections. I don't care about the caloric content anymore. :)

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haagen_daz

March 31, 2022

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No problem! Do you have a favorite country for milk?

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SummerTeaWater

April 1, 2022

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Actually, I haven't tried many countries' milk. I agree that the Australian milk is taster than others. :)

Drinking Milk


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Recently, I drink milk every morning for my health.


Recently, I have been drinking milk every morning for my health.

Recently, I have been drinking milk every morning for my health.

I drink is ok, "I have been" is more natural, this tense is really confusing though :)

Recently, I have been drinking milk every morning for my health.

Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it.


Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it.

If you wanted to show that this unwillingness was only temporary, you could try something like this: "At first, I was unwilling to drink it because of the calories in it."

Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it at first.

Because of its calories, I was unwilling to drink it before.

One day, I saw a blog posting that a man tasted a lot of milk made by foreign nations.


One day, I saw a blog posting that where a man tasted a lot of milk made byin foreign nations.

Or: "I saw a blog post in which a man tasted a lot of milk..." which is slightly more formal. Or: "I saw a blog post about a man who tasted a lot of milk..." if the author of the blog post is not the man who is tasting all this milk. "Different countries" is a less formal-sounding alternative to "foreign nations."

One day, I saw a blog posting that where a man tasted a lots of different kinds of milk made by foreign nations.

He said Australian milk was good for him.


He said Australian milk was good for him.

Do you mean that the Australian milk tasted good to him?

He said Australian milk was good for him.

did he mean it was best for his health or that it tasted the best? it's a bit confusing in the context

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was also curious about other milk, so I started trying to buy them.


I was also curious about other types of milk, so I started trying to buy them.

I was also curious about other types of milk, so I started trying to buy them.

Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk becomes one of my daily routine.


Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk has becomes one part of my daily routine.

Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk becoames one of my daily routines.

Their unique tastes make me drink more, and now drinking milk becomes onepart of my daily routine.

Anyway, the milk is definitely tasty for me.


Anyways, the milk is definitely tasty forto me.

It's unclear whether you mean that all milk is tasty to you - in which case, you can leave out "the" - "Anyways, milk is definitely tasty to me."

Anyway, the milk is definitely tasty for me.

Anyway, theI think milk is definitely tasty for me.

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