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tommy

Dec. 5, 2022

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Drinking culture

As far as I know, no animal drink alcohol willingly other than human being. Alcohol sometimes breaks one's career, relationship, or life at the same time it has created human history. We have acquired enormous number of technologies and food culture through an effort to have fan with liquor. Aside from Islamic society, every country has it's own drinking culture. People know drinking together is the simplest way to get acquainted without verbal communication.
I always wonder if I should turn down an invitation to a drinking party. Though I love the taste of alcoholic drinks such as beer, fruit cocktail, and Japanese sake, I'd like to chose friends to drink with. Some of my friends from university compel me to drink until I become nauseous. Even though most Japanese people can't drink a lot due to the lack of the degradative enzyme, they want to be drunk as if they believe that bad things happened to them can be disappeared. I think it is a negative part of Japanese drinking culture.

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As far as I know, no animal drinks alcohol willingly other than human beings.

Alcohol sometimes breaks one's career, relationship, or life and, at the same time, it has created human history.

We have acquired an enormous number of technologies and food culture through an effort to have faun with liquor.

Aside from Islamic society, every country has it's own drinking culture.

"It's" is a contraction for "it is." Here, "its" is possessive and therefore doesn't use an apostrophe.

People know drinking together is the simplest way to get acquainted without verbal communication.

I always wonder if I should turn down an invitation to a drinking party.

Though I love the taste of alcoholic drinks such as beer, fruit cocktails, and Japanese sake, I'd like to chosose the friends towith whom I drink with.

Some of my friends from university compel me to drink until I become nauseous.

Even though most Japanese people can't drink a lot due to the lack of the degradativalcohol dehydrogenase enzyme, they want to be drunk as if they believe that bad things which happened to them can be made to disappeared.

私もその事情を持っています。それで、お酒を飲みません。

I think it is a negative part of Japanese drinking culture.

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賛成しました。残念ですね。

よく書けています!

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tommy

Dec. 11, 2022

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ありがとうございます!

Drinking culture

As far as I know, no animal drinks alcohol willingly, other than the human being.

Alcohol sometimes breakdestroys one's career, relationships, or life a. At the same time, it has created human history.

Instead of "created", I would use "changed".

We have acquireddeveloped an enormous number of technologies and food culture through an effort to have faun with liquor.

Aside from Islamic society, every country has it's own drinking culture.

Though I love the taste of alcoholic drinks such as beer, fruit cocktail, and Japanese sake, I'd like to choose friends to drink with.

Some of my friends from university compelpressure me to drink until I become nauseousated.

Even though most Japanese people can't drink a lot due to the lack of the degradative enzyme, they want to be druink as if they believe thatit can erase the bad things that happened to them can be disappeared.

I think it is a negative part of Japanese drinking culture.

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tommy

Dec. 11, 2022

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Thanks a lot!

As far as I know, no animals drink alcohol willingly other than human beings.

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Quite a few animals consume alcohol. This article discusses some of them: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/science-nature/the-alcoholics-of-the-animal-world-81007700/

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tommy

Dec. 11, 2022

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Thank you for letting me know that!

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Drinking cCulture

As far as I know, no animal drink alcohol willingly other than human being.


As far as I know, no animals drink alcohol willingly other than human beings.

As far as I know, no animal drinks alcohol willingly, other than the human being.

As far as I know, no animal drinks alcohol willingly other than human beings.

Alcohol sometimes breaks one's career, relationship, or life at the same time it has created human history.


Alcohol sometimes breakdestroys one's career, relationships, or life a. At the same time, it has created human history.

Instead of "created", I would use "changed".

Alcohol sometimes breaks one's career, relationship, or life and, at the same time, it has created human history.

We have acquired enormous number of technologies and food culture through an effort to have fan with liquor.


We have acquireddeveloped an enormous number of technologies and food culture through an effort to have faun with liquor.

We have acquired an enormous number of technologies and food culture through an effort to have faun with liquor.

Aside from Islamic society, every country has it's own drinking culture.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Aside from Islamic society, every country has it's own drinking culture.

"It's" is a contraction for "it is." Here, "its" is possessive and therefore doesn't use an apostrophe.

People know drinking together is the simplest way to get acquainted without verbal communication.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I always wonder if I should turn down an invitation to a drinking party.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Though I love the taste of alcoholic drinks such as beer, fruit cocktail, and Japanese sake, I'd like to chose friends to drink with.


Though I love the taste of alcoholic drinks such as beer, fruit cocktail, and Japanese sake, I'd like to choose friends to drink with.

Though I love the taste of alcoholic drinks such as beer, fruit cocktails, and Japanese sake, I'd like to chosose the friends towith whom I drink with.

Some of my friends from university compel me to drink until I become nauseous.


Some of my friends from university compelpressure me to drink until I become nauseousated.

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Even though most Japanese people can't drink a lot due to the lack of the degradative enzyme, they want to be drunk as if they believe that bad things happened to them can be disappeared.


Even though most Japanese people can't drink a lot due to the lack of the degradative enzyme, they want to be druink as if they believe thatit can erase the bad things that happened to them can be disappeared.

Even though most Japanese people can't drink a lot due to the lack of the degradativalcohol dehydrogenase enzyme, they want to be drunk as if they believe that bad things which happened to them can be made to disappeared.

私もその事情を持っています。それで、お酒を飲みません。

I think it is a negative part of Japanese drinking culture.


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