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cemre

July 16, 2025

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I usually have very strange dreams but this dream was quite normal. I guess this dream which I will describe was not my last dream but it was a dream I had recently.
In my dream I was changing my school to a better school but although I am sure that this new school will better for me I didn't want to change my school.
I am a kind of person that never want to get out of my confort zone and in real life my school is a good school but doesn't match my goals. There is no better school to change my school but any little minor change is unbearable to me. So I guess because of this reasons I had this dream.

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I usually have very strange dreams, but this dream was quite normal.

I guess this dream which I will describe was noasn't my lamost dream but it was a dream I had recently.cent, but I will describe it.

try to say it in the easiest way possible

In my dream, I was changing my schoolent to a better school, but although I am sure that this newthat school willas better for me, I didn't want to change myswitch school.s.

I am athe kind of person that never wants to get out of my conmfort zone and my in real life my school is a good school, but doesn't match my goals.

So I guess because of this reasonsthis is why I had this dream.

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cemre

July 20, 2025

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Thank you!

Dreams

I usually have very strange dreams, but this dream was quite normal.

I guess this dream which I will describe was not my last dream but it was a dream I had recentlywill describe a recent dream that I had.

In my dream, I was changing my current school to a better school but aone. Although I amwas sure that this new school willould better for me, I didn't want to change my current school.

I am athe kind of person that never wants to get out of my conmfort zone and i. In real life, my school is a good school, but doesn't match my goals.

There is no better school to change my school but. However, any little minor change is unbearable to me.

So I guess because of thisDue to these reasons, I had this dream.

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I made your sentences more concise and readable. What makes this new school better than your current one?

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cemre

July 16, 2025

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In Türkiye we choose field in the last two years of high school. My field is language but unfortunately there is no language class in my school and in my dream, I was going to a language school. By the way, thank you for your adjustments.

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marblemenow

July 16, 2025

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You're welcome.

Dreams

I usually have very strange dreams, but this dream was quite normal.

I guess this dream which I will describe was not my last dream, but it was a dream I had recently.

In my dream, I was changing my schools to a better school but, and although I amwas sure that this new school willould be better for me, I didn't want to change my (schools).

Changing schools = going to a different school
Change my school = you will change something about your current school

Past tense because we are talking about the past
No need for both "but" AND "although"

You could leave off the parentheses at the end and still be understood

I am athe kind of person that never wants to geto out of my conmfort zone, and in real life my school is a good school buteven though doesn't match my goals.

"Even though" = "despite the fact that it," both better options here than "but"

There is no better school to change my schoolto, but any little /minor change is unbearable to me.

Choose one (little or minor), the meaning is the same either way

So I guess because of this reasonsthis is why I had this dream.

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Good job

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cemre

July 16, 2025

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Thank you!

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I usually have very strange dreams but this dream was quite normal.


I usually have very strange dreams, but this dream was quite normal.

I usually have very strange dreams, but this dream was quite normal.

I usually have very strange dreams, but this dream was quite normal.

I guess this dream which I will describe was not my last dream but it was a dream I had recently.


I guess this dream which I will describe was not my last dream, but it was a dream I had recently.

I guess this dream which I will describe was not my last dream but it was a dream I had recentlywill describe a recent dream that I had.

I guess this dream which I will describe was noasn't my lamost dream but it was a dream I had recently.cent, but I will describe it.

try to say it in the easiest way possible

In my dream I was changing my school to a better school but although I am sure that this new school will better for me I didn't want to change my school.


In my dream, I was changing my schools to a better school but, and although I amwas sure that this new school willould be better for me, I didn't want to change my (schools).

Changing schools = going to a different school Change my school = you will change something about your current school Past tense because we are talking about the past No need for both "but" AND "although" You could leave off the parentheses at the end and still be understood

In my dream, I was changing my current school to a better school but aone. Although I amwas sure that this new school willould better for me, I didn't want to change my current school.

In my dream, I was changing my schoolent to a better school, but although I am sure that this newthat school willas better for me, I didn't want to change myswitch school.s.

I am a kind of person that never want to get out of my confort zone and in real life my school is a good school but doesn't match my goals.


I am athe kind of person that never wants to geto out of my conmfort zone, and in real life my school is a good school buteven though doesn't match my goals.

"Even though" = "despite the fact that it," both better options here than "but"

I am athe kind of person that never wants to get out of my conmfort zone and i. In real life, my school is a good school, but doesn't match my goals.

I am athe kind of person that never wants to get out of my conmfort zone and my in real life my school is a good school, but doesn't match my goals.

There is no better school to change my school but any little minor change is unbearable to me.


There is no better school to change my schoolto, but any little /minor change is unbearable to me.

Choose one (little or minor), the meaning is the same either way

There is no better school to change my school but. However, any little minor change is unbearable to me.

So I guess because of this reasons I had this dream.


So I guess because of this reasonsthis is why I had this dream.

So I guess because of thisDue to these reasons, I had this dream.

So I guess because of this reasonsthis is why I had this dream.

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