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milapila2706

Feb. 12, 2024

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Dreams

I used to write dreams on a little notebook, when I had time. It really helped a me a lot to realized how my mind works. For example, I had always dream about my days in primary and high school. I was to shy back then, because of some insecurities. So I dreamed about how anxious I was when trying to speak with my classmates. Well, that was first, then It was just me getting along with everyone, It felt so good. Guess it is because I'm working on my self-esteem, so I think I'm better now. That's all, first time writing here!

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Dreams

I used to write my dreams oin a little notebook, when I had time.

in a little notebook: inside a little notebook
on a little notebook: on the cover of the notebook

It really helped a me a lot to realized how my mind works.

For example, I had always dreamt/dreamed about my days in primary and high school.

I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities.

So I dreamed about how anxious I was when trying to speak with my classmates.

Well, that was at first, then Iit was just me gettingabout how I got along with everyone,. It felt so good.!

at first = al principio

GI guess it is because I'm have been working on my self-esteem, so I think I'm better now.

That's all,. This is my first time writing here!

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Vale, ¡qué bien! Good!

I used to write dreams oin a little notebook, when I had the time.

It really helped a me a lotme to realized how my mind works.

For example, I had always dreamed about my days in primary and high school.

I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities I had.

So I dreamed about how anxious I was when trying to speak withto my classmates.

This sentence can be added to the last one I think. ("and so...)"

Well, that was at first, but then Iit was just me getting along with everyone, Iso it felt so good.

GI guess it is because I'm working on my self-esteem, so I think I'm betterfeeling better about myself now.

I think this is what you mean, right?

That's all, first time writing here!

Feedback

Great for a first entry!

I used to write dreams oin a little notebook, when I had time.

On = on the cover of the notebook, for example.

It really helped a me a lot to realized how my mind works.

For example, I had always dreamt about my days in primary and high school.

I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities.

Well, that was first, then Iit was just me getting along with everyone, Iand it felt so good.

GI guess it is because I'mve workinged on my self-esteem, so I think I'm better now.

That's all, first time writing here!

Feedback

Nice!

I used to write dreams oin a little notebook, when I had the time.

It really helped a me a lotme to realized how my mind works.

For example, I had always dreamed about my days in primary and high school.

I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities.

So, I dreamed about how anxious I was when trying to speak with my classmates.

Well, that was the first, t dream. Then Iit was just me getting along with everyone,. It felt so good.

GI guess it iwas because I'm have been working on my self-esteem, so I think that I'm better now.

That's all,. This is my first time writing here!.

That's all, first time writing here!


That's all,. This is my first time writing here!.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's all, first time writing here!

That's all,. This is my first time writing here!

It really helped a me a lot to realized how my mind works.


It really helped a me a lotme to realized how my mind works.

It really helped a me a lot to realized how my mind works.

It really helped a me a lotme to realized how my mind works.

It really helped a me a lot to realized how my mind works.

For example, I had always dream about my days in primary and high school.


For example, I had always dreamed about my days in primary and high school.

For example, I had always dreamt about my days in primary and high school.

For example, I had always dreamed about my days in primary and high school.

For example, I had always dreamt/dreamed about my days in primary and high school.

I was to shy back then, because of some insecurities.


I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities.

I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities.

I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities I had.

I was too shy back then, because of some insecurities.

So I dreamed about how anxious I was when trying to speak with my classmates.


So, I dreamed about how anxious I was when trying to speak with my classmates.

So I dreamed about how anxious I was when trying to speak withto my classmates.

This sentence can be added to the last one I think. ("and so...)"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Dreams


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used to write dreams on a little notebook, when I had time.


I used to write dreams oin a little notebook, when I had the time.

I used to write dreams oin a little notebook, when I had time.

On = on the cover of the notebook, for example.

I used to write dreams oin a little notebook, when I had the time.

I used to write my dreams oin a little notebook, when I had time.

in a little notebook: inside a little notebook on a little notebook: on the cover of the notebook

Well, that was first, then It was just me getting along with everyone, It felt so good.


Well, that was the first, t dream. Then Iit was just me getting along with everyone,. It felt so good.

Well, that was first, then Iit was just me getting along with everyone, Iand it felt so good.

Well, that was at first, but then Iit was just me getting along with everyone, Iso it felt so good.

Well, that was at first, then Iit was just me gettingabout how I got along with everyone,. It felt so good.!

at first = al principio

Guess it is because I'm working on my self-esteem, so I think I'm better now.


GI guess it iwas because I'm have been working on my self-esteem, so I think that I'm better now.

GI guess it is because I'mve workinged on my self-esteem, so I think I'm better now.

GI guess it is because I'm working on my self-esteem, so I think I'm betterfeeling better about myself now.

I think this is what you mean, right?

GI guess it is because I'm have been working on my self-esteem, so I think I'm better now.

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