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simonaliu

Jan. 22, 2024

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Dreams

I had different dreams this days.
Sometimes I dreamt that I was flying over mountains, sometimes I dreamt about someone else’s death. Those dreams are so vivid that I thought they were real happened until I wake up.
I even dreamt some pictures that would never happen in real life. For example, I dreamt evils came into someone’s brain and caused them ill, only the magic bow and arrow can save them.
Why we have dreams? Why I have dreams so often?
Traditional Chinese medicine science think that there are several types of reasons. The first type is irascible, which means people have bad livers. The second type is brain. Those who have particular job needing them use particular parts of brain would easily have dreams. (It’s all my bad description that made it sound like deceptive tricks)
They suggest that we should keep a healthy lifestyle. Don’t stay up late. That may help you have a good night with less dream.

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Dreams

I hadThese past few days, I've had a variety of different dreams this days.

Sometimes I dreamt that I was flying over mountains, sometimes I dreamt about someone else’s death.

Those dreams awere so vivid that I thought they were really happeneding until I waoke up.

Since you were previously speaking in the past tense, you should continue to do so here to avoid confusion.

I even dreamt of some picturethings that would never happen in real life.

For example, I dreamt some devils came into someone’s brain and caused them ill,harm; only thea magic bow and arrow canould save them.

Since you are speaking in the past tense, you would use "could". "Can" would be used if it was happening at that moment.

Why do we have dreams?

Why do I have dreams so often?

Traditional Chinese medicine science thinkhypothesizes that there are several types of reasonreasons for this.

The first type is irascible, which means people have badreason is when people anger easily, which indicates they have problems with their livers.

The second type isreason deals with the brain.

Those who have particular job needingjobs themat use particularcertain parts of the brain would therefore, easily have dreams.

(It’s all my badmy poor descriptions that madke ithis sounds like deceptive tricks) fantasy).
They suggest that we should
keepmaintain a healthy lifestyle.

Don’t stay up late.

Thatis may help you have a good night with lesssleep with fewer dreams.

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You chose a difficult topic! Good for you. Keep up the great work. Focus on your tenses (example: "have" vs "had". "Can" vs "Could") and you will notice a big improvement.

Dreams

I had a variety of different dreams thisese past few days.

Sometimes I dreamt that I was flying over mountains, sometimes I dreamt about someone else’s death.

Those dreams awere so vivid that I thought they were really happeneding until I waoke up.

I even dreamt of some picturscenes that would never happen in real life.

For example, I dreamt devils came into someone’s brain and caused them ill,to be ill, and only the magic bow and arrow can save them.

Why do we have dreams?

Why do I have dreams so often?

TAccording to traditional Chinese medicine science think that , there are several types of reasons.

The first type isFirst, irascibleility, which means people have badindicates problems with the livers.

The sSecond, type ishe brain.

Those who have particular job needing them useith jobs that require using particular parts of their brain would easily have dreams.

(It’s all my bad description that made it sound like deceptive tricks) They may sound like tricks, but this is only because my description is bad.)
They suggest that we should keep a healthy lifestyle.

Don’t stay up late.

That may help you have a good night's sleep with lessfewer dreams.

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Well done!

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simonaliu

Jan. 22, 2024

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thank you!

Those dreams are so vivid that I thought they were real happened until I wake up.


Those dreams awere so vivid that I thought they were really happeneding until I waoke up.

Those dreams awere so vivid that I thought they were really happeneding until I waoke up.

Since you were previously speaking in the past tense, you should continue to do so here to avoid confusion.

I even dreamt some pictures that would never happen in real life.


I even dreamt of some picturscenes that would never happen in real life.

I even dreamt of some picturethings that would never happen in real life.

For example, I dreamt evils came into someone’s brain and caused them ill, only the magic bow and arrow can save them.


For example, I dreamt devils came into someone’s brain and caused them ill,to be ill, and only the magic bow and arrow can save them.

For example, I dreamt some devils came into someone’s brain and caused them ill,harm; only thea magic bow and arrow canould save them.

Since you are speaking in the past tense, you would use "could". "Can" would be used if it was happening at that moment.

Dreams


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I had different dreams this days.


I had a variety of different dreams thisese past few days.

I hadThese past few days, I've had a variety of different dreams this days.

Sometimes I dreamt that I was flying over mountains, sometimes I dreamt about someone else’s death.


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Why we have dreams?


Why do we have dreams?

Why do we have dreams?

Why I have dreams so often?


Why do I have dreams so often?

Why do I have dreams so often?

Traditional Chinese medicine science think that there are several types of reasons.


TAccording to traditional Chinese medicine science think that , there are several types of reasons.

Traditional Chinese medicine science thinkhypothesizes that there are several types of reasonreasons for this.

The first type is irascible, which means people have bad livers.


The first type isFirst, irascibleility, which means people have badindicates problems with the livers.

The first type is irascible, which means people have badreason is when people anger easily, which indicates they have problems with their livers.

Those who have particular job needing them use particular parts of brain would easily have dreams.


Those who have particular job needing them useith jobs that require using particular parts of their brain would easily have dreams.

Those who have particular job needingjobs themat use particularcertain parts of the brain would therefore, easily have dreams.

(It’s all my bad description that made it sound like deceptive tricks) They suggest that we should keep a healthy lifestyle.


(It’s all my bad description that made it sound like deceptive tricks) They may sound like tricks, but this is only because my description is bad.)
They suggest that we should keep a healthy lifestyle.

(It’s all my badmy poor descriptions that madke ithis sounds like deceptive tricks) fantasy).
They suggest that we should
keepmaintain a healthy lifestyle.

Don’t stay up late.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That may help you have a good night with less dream.


That may help you have a good night's sleep with lessfewer dreams.

Thatis may help you have a good night with lesssleep with fewer dreams.

The second type is brain.


The sSecond, type ishe brain.

The second type isreason deals with the brain.

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