Dream trips

izyvhs

Dec. 21, 2021

Many people learn languages to travel. Unfortunately, that’s not my case. I’m not even responsible for my own money and international trips are really expensive in my country. But I do dream about traveling around the world. It’s easy for a country to attract me. It just needs to have a beautiful language, be a good place to live or have famous people that I like. That makes the list really large, so I’ve narrowed it down to 3 countries.

Because I’m also learning French, the idea of visiting a French-speaking country came to my mind. First I thought about France because, you know, it’s the obvious answer. Then I also thought of visiting Belgium because I have relatives that live there. But Canada is my first option, especially because English and French are spoken there, and I’d have the chance to practice both. I think the most popular cities to travel there to are Toronto, Vancouver, and Montreal, but I don’t know which one I’d visit since I didn’t spend more than a few minutes searching about exchange programs in Canada before I checked the prices of the flight tickets and gave up.

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Faizyrooma4

Dream trips

Many people learn languages to travel.

Unfortunately, that’s not my case.

I’m not even responsible for my own money and international trips are really expensive in my country.

But I do dream about traveling around the world.

It’s easy for a country to attract me.

It just needs to have a beautiful language, be a good place to live or have famous people that I like.

That makes the list really l~~arge~~ong, so I’ve narrowed it down to 3 countries.

Because I’m also learning French, the idea of visiting a French-speaking country came to my mind.

First I thought about France because, you know, it’s the obvious answer.

Then I also thought of visiting Belgium because I have relatives that live there.

But Canada is my first option, especially because English and French are spoken there, and I’d have the chance to practice both.

I think the most popular cities to travel there to are Toronto, Vancouver, and Montreal, but I don’t know which one I’d visit since I didn’t spend more than a few minutes searching about exchange programs in Canada before I checked the prices of the flight tickets and gave up.

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Very nicely-written! :)

learninggerman

Dream trips

Many people learn languages to travel.

Unfortunately, that’s not my case.

I’m not even responsible for my own money and international trips are really expensive in my country.

But I do dream about traveling around the world.

It’s easy for a country to attract me.

It just needs to have a beautiful language, be a good place to live or have famous people that I like.

That makes the list really l~~arge~~ong, so I’ve narrowed it down to 3 countries.

Long usually describes a list better than large

Because I’m also learning French, the idea of visiting a French-speaking country came to my mind.

First I thought about France because, you know, it’s the obvious answer.

Then I also thought of visiting Belgium because I have relatives that live there.

But Canada is my first option, especially because English and French are spoken there, and I’d have the chance to practice both.

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Good use of natural fillers such as you know, your opinions are justified quite well too.

Dream trips