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I have been working for more than ten years. I feel there is nothing interesting to me recently. Every day, work is repetitive routine and I feel it is very dull. What's worse, during this involution period it is very hard for older people to get alternative jobs.
I have no idea how to get a software develop job and not sure where it can solve my current problems.
Dream of working abroad
I have been working for more than ten years.
I feel there is nothing interesting to mehappening recently.
Every day, work is a repetitive routine and I feel it is very dull.
What's worse, during this involution period it is very hard for older people to get alternative jobs.
I have no idea how to get a software development job and I am not sure where it canif it will solve my current problems.
Dream of working abroad
I have been working for more than ten years.
I feel there islike nothing has been interesting to me recentlately.
“feel like” + “lately” sound more natural.
Every day, work is feels like the same repetitive routine, and I feel it is verit has become really dull.
More natural flow and phrasing.
What'’s worse, during this involution periodperiod of intense competition, it i’s very hard for older people to get alternativeworkers to find other jobs.
Replaced uncommon “involution” with everyday phrasing; “older workers” sounds more natural.
I have no idea how to get a software development job, and I’m not sure where it cather it would even solve my current problems.
Corrected grammar and clarified the second clause.
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Dreaming / A dream of working abroad
I have been working for more than ten years.
I feel there is nothing interesting to me recently.these days.
Suggestion: Nothing feels interesting to me these days.
Note: we generally don’t use “recently” with the simple present tense.
Every day, work is a repetitive routine and I feel it is very dull.
What's worse, during this involution period it is very hard for older people to get alternativchange jobs.
As I mentioned on one of your earlier posts, “involution” doesn’t mean anything outside of science/biology. I suggest you use different words to convey what you mean by “involution.”
I have no idea how to get a software development job and am not sure where it canther getting a software development job could solve my current problems.
Is this what you mean?
Dream of working abroad
I have been working for more than ten years.
I feel like there ishas been nothing interesting to me recently.
Every day, work ishas become a repetitive routine and Iit feel it is very dull.
What's worse, during this involution period, it is very hard for older people to get alternative jobs.
I have no idea how to get a software development job and not sure wherehow it can solve my current problems.
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I feel there is nothing interesting to me recently. I feel like there I feel there is nothing interesting to me Suggestion: Nothing feels interesting to me these days. Note: we generally don’t use “recently” with the simple present tense. I feel “feel like” + “lately” sound more natural. I feel there is nothing interesting |
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Every day, work is repetitive routine and I feel it is very dull. Every day, work Every day, work is a repetitive routine and I feel it is very dull. Every day More natural flow and phrasing. Every day, work is a repetitive routine and I feel it is very dull. |
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What's worse, during this involution period it is very hard for older people to get alternative jobs. What's worse, during this involution period, it is very hard for older people to get alternative jobs. What's worse, during this As I mentioned on one of your earlier posts, “involution” doesn’t mean anything outside of science/biology. I suggest you use different words to convey what you mean by “involution.” What Replaced uncommon “involution” with everyday phrasing; “older workers” sounds more natural. What's worse, during this |
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I have no idea how to get a software develop job and not sure where it can solve my current problems. I have no idea how to get a software development job and not sure I have no idea how to get a software development job and am not sure whe Is this what you mean? I have no idea how to get a software development job, and I’m not sure whe Corrected grammar and clarified the second clause. I have no idea how to get a software development job and I am not sure |
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