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NavidRostami

April 28, 2022

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Honestly, I intended to buy a four-bedroom apartment with a giant balcony overlooking the sea near an urban and famous area after I graduated from university outside of Iran.
I can decorate it and design my ideal home with whatever facilities I want. It has an unobstructed view. It have a giant yard and beautiful front walk and entrance door that cover by garden and flower bed.Have a patio and roof garden that have a large lawn lawn surrounded by a high hedge. I planning to settle down LA in my future.

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Honestly, I intended to buy a four-bedroom apartment with a giant balcony overlooking the sea near an urban and famous area after I graduated from university outside of Iran.

I canwould decorate it and design my ideal home with whatever facilities I want.

You're talking about a hypothetical house, but "can" makes it sound like you're talking about a house you currently own.

It haswould have an unobstructed view.

It would have a giant yard, and beautiful front walk and an entrance door that covered by a garden and a flower bed.H It would have a patio and a roof garden withat have a large lawn lawn surrounded by a high hedge.

I am planning to settle down LA in mythe future.

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NavidRostami

April 29, 2022

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Thanks For your corrections

Dream City & House

Honestly, I intended to buy a four-bedroom apartment with a giant balcony overlooking the sea near an urban and famous area after I graduated from university outside of Iran.

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I can decorate it and design my ideal home with whatever facilities I want.

I canwould decorate it and design my ideal home with whatever facilities I want.

You're talking about a hypothetical house, but "can" makes it sound like you're talking about a house you currently own.

It has an unobstructed view.

It haswould have an unobstructed view.

It have a giant yard and beautiful front walk and entrance door that cover by garden and flower bed.Have a patio and roof garden that have a large lawn lawn surrounded by a high hedge.

It would have a giant yard, and beautiful front walk and an entrance door that covered by a garden and a flower bed.H It would have a patio and a roof garden withat have a large lawn lawn surrounded by a high hedge.

I planning to settle down LA in my future.

I am planning to settle down LA in mythe future.

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