The qualifications for candidates includinge a score above 140 for both of the tests. The qualifications for candidates include a score above 140 for both of the tests.

The qualifications for candidates includinge a score above 140 for both of the tests. The qualifications for candidates include a score above 140 for both of the tests.

Last weekend, I attended a simulation of the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by the cram school. Last weekend, I attended a simulation of the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by the cram school.

Last weekend, I attended a simulation of the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by thea cram school. Last weekend, I attended a simulation of the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by a cram school.

Or if you only go to this cram school "my cram school".

Last weekend, I attended a simulation ofor the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by themy cram school. Last weekend, I attended a simulation for the TOEIC speaking and writing test held by my cram school.

I scored 120 ofn speaking and 160 ofn writing, both out of 200. I scored 120 on speaking and 160 on writing, both out of 200.

I scored 120 of(in / for) speaking and 160 of(in / for) writing, both out of 200. I scored 120 (in / for) speaking and 160 (in / for) writing, both out of 200.

"in" is most natural

I scored 120 ofin speaking and 160 ofin writing, both out of 200. I scored 120 in speaking and 160 in writing, both out of 200.

WMy writing's score was acceptable, yet there's a lot of space toroom for progress. My writing's score was acceptable, yet there's a lot of room for progress.

WThe writing's score was acceptable, yet there's a lot of space to progress. The writing score was acceptable, yet there's a lot of space to progress.

Or more natural "to grow"

Writing's scoreMy score for writing was acceptable yet there's a lot of space tofor progress. My score for writing was acceptable yet there's a lot of space for progress.

You can also say 'room for improvement'

But my speaking's score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this score didn't meet the minimum to apply to the position that I want. But my speaking score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this score didn't meet the minimum to apply to the position that I want.

But the speaking's score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this score didn't meet the minimum to apply to the position that I want. But the speaking score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this score didn't meet the minimum to apply to the position that I want.

But my speaking's score was far from satisfactory, not even close because this. My score didn't meet the minimum to apply tofor the position that I wanted. But my speaking score was far from satisfactory, not even close. My score didn't meet the minimum to apply for the position that I wanted.

Guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English, and try to be prepared as soon as possible; or not to mention others phases afterI have to resume,. I'llve failed to pass just the first requirement fromof the companys. Guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English, and try to be prepared as soon as possible; not to mention others phases I have to resume. I've failed to pass just the first requirement of the company.

Guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English, and try to beget prepared as soon as possible; or not to mention the others phases after the resume, I'll (stage). I failed to pass just the first requirement from (the companys / these companies). Guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English and try to get prepared as soon as possible; not to mention the other phases after the resume (stage). I failed to pass just the first requirement from (the company / these companies).

GI guess I'll have to spend more time on speaking English, and try to be prepared as soon as possible; or not to for the next test; not even mentioning the others phases after resume, I'llthe initial resume screening, I'd have failed to pass just the first requirement from the companys. I guess I'll have to spend more time speaking English, and try to be prepared as soon as possible for the next test; not even mentioning the other phases after the initial resume screening, I'd have failed to pass just the first requirement from the company.