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March 17, 2021

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It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I had married. There are many things to do. Firstly, It’s very important to make what my family especially my daughter eat well. She doesn’t like vegetables. So I need cook them delicious. Secondly I don’t want to use much time to cook. Because I only have 3.5. hours until going to bed. For the last, this is important the best is that I want to know how they are spending today through conversation during dinner.


結婚して7年経った今でも、私にとって料理をすることは容易くない。やることが沢山ある。まず、私の家族、特に娘が良く食べる物を作ることが大切だ。彼女は野菜が好きではないので、美味しく調理しなくてはいけない。次に、私は料理にあまり時間をかけたくない。寝るまでに3時間半しかないから。最後に、食事中の会話を通して、家族がどんな1日を過ごしていたのかを知りたい。

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She doesn’t like vegetables.

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It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I had married.


It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I hadgot married. It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I got married.

In speech at least, we always say "got married." Had married works only in a few contexts like retelling stories that happened in the past. "She was happy, because she had married 3 days earlier." Still, that's rather formal. Typical use would be "She was happy, because she had gotten married 3 days earlier."

There are many things to do.


Firstly, It’s very important to make what my family especially my daughter eat well.


Firstly, It’s very important to make wfood that my family, especially my daughter eat well, likes to eat. Firstly, It’s very important to make food that my family, especially my daughter, likes to eat.

She doesn’t like vegetables.


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So I need cook them delicious.


So I need cook them in a way that makes them delicious. So I need cook them in a way that makes them delicious.

If you used "deliciously" (the adverb of "delicious," which is the form you need to use to describe a verb like "cook"), it makes it sounds like the way you're cooking/preparing the food tastes good rather than the food itself. It's a big rephrase here, but there's not a simple way I could think of to say what you wanted in English without making the sentence longer.

Secondly I don’t want to use much time to cook.


Secondly, I don’t want to usespend much time to cooking. Second, I don’t want to spend much time cooking.

Use too much time to cook was grammatically correct but not the way we'd phrase it. We "spend time" on things.

Because I only have 3.5. hours until going to bed.


Because I only have 3.5. hours until goingeach night before I go to bed. Because I only have 3.5. hours each night before I go to bed.

For the last, this is important the best is that I want to know how they are spending today through conversation during dinner.


For the last, this isinally, the most important the besting is that I want to know how they are spending tomy family spent the day through conversation duringat dinner. Finally, the most important thing is that I want to know how my family spent the day through conversation at dinner.

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