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Ducky

July 18, 2022

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Drawing at the Morning

Saturday morning I went to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketching. We meet in a park close of Sant Pau hospital. In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930. The morning was a sunny day and without any clouds in the sky. I drawing seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted. After two hours, the meet was over. We make a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later. Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.

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Drawing atin the Morning

Saturday morning I went to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketchingan Urban Sketching meeting to draw.

We all meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital.

In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.

We already know where you are :) we can exclude the location.

Theat morning was a sunny day and without anywith no clouds in the sky.

I drawing seatedsat in the best place wi, in the shadow I found, and with the view I wanteds with an amazing view.

After two hours, the meet was over.

We makeFirst, we took a photo tof all the drawings first, and, then with all of us later.

Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.

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Ducky

July 19, 2022

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Thanks a lot.

Drawing atin the Morning

Saturday morning, I went to drawing in a meeting of Uan urban Ssketching meet-up.

We meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital.

InAt thise park, I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.

The morningIt was a sunny day and without any clouds in the sky.

I drawing seated in the best place with shadowsat in drew in the best spot I fcound, andld find, a shady place with the view I wanted.

After two hours, the meet was over.

We make atook photo tos of all the drawings first, and with all of us latthen we took pictures of ourselves together.

Soon after, I wenthortly after that, I walkinged to the underground to come backreturn home.

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Ducky

July 19, 2022

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Thanks Bees.

Drawing atin the Morning

On Saturday morning I went out to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketching.

A few changes make this sentence more natural :)

We meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital.

Preposition

In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an big interesting big house built in 1930.

English usually follows an adjective ordering:
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/adjective-order/

I drawingew seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted.

Or, "was drawing" to match past tense.

After two hours, the meet was over.

We maketook a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later.

I take/took/have taken photos
He takes/took/has taken photos
They take/took/have taken photos

Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.

In the United States it's always a "subway" or "metro", but this is probably correct for UK English.

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Great work :)

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Ducky

July 19, 2022

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I really appreciate your corrections. I take note.

Drawing at the Morning


Drawing atin the Morning

Drawing atin the Morning

Drawing atin the Morning

Saturday morning I went to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketching.


On Saturday morning I went out to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketching.

A few changes make this sentence more natural :)

Saturday morning, I went to drawing in a meeting of Uan urban Ssketching meet-up.

Saturday morning I went to drawing in a meeting of Urban Sketchingan Urban Sketching meeting to draw.

We meet in a park close of Sant Pau hospital.


We meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital.

Preposition

We meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital.

We all meet in a park close tof Sant Pau hospital.

In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.


In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an big interesting big house built in 1930.

English usually follows an adjective ordering: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/adjective-order/

InAt thise park, I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.

In this park I chose to draw the "Casa Museu Mas Ravetllat", an interesting big house built in 1930.

We already know where you are :) we can exclude the location.

The morning was a sunny day and without any clouds in the sky.


The morningIt was a sunny day and without any clouds in the sky.

Theat morning was a sunny day and without anywith no clouds in the sky.

I drawing seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted.


I drawingew seated in the best place with shadow I found, and with the view I wanted.

Or, "was drawing" to match past tense.

I drawing seated in the best place with shadowsat in drew in the best spot I fcound, andld find, a shady place with the view I wanted.

I drawing seatedsat in the best place wi, in the shadow I found, and with the view I wanteds with an amazing view.

After two hours, the meet was over.


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We make a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later.


We maketook a photo to all drawings first, and with all of us later.

I take/took/have taken photos He takes/took/has taken photos They take/took/have taken photos

We make atook photo tos of all the drawings first, and with all of us latthen we took pictures of ourselves together.

We makeFirst, we took a photo tof all the drawings first, and, then with all of us later.

Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.


Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.

In the United States it's always a "subway" or "metro", but this is probably correct for UK English.

Soon after, I wenthortly after that, I walkinged to the underground to come backreturn home.

Soon after, I went walking to the underground to come back home.

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