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Drain

When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor soaked in water.
I thought I have to change the drain net, but I felt troublesome.

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Drain

When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor soaked ingot flooded with water.

Soaked might implicate the floor has water retaining properties. i.e. a rug or a sponge.

I thought I have to change the drain net, but I felt troublesome.

I might say something like "It was too troublesome" or "I felt too troubled to do it"

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Great work! I wish I could make more complex sentences like this in my target language! :')

When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor got soaked inwith water.

I thoughtink I have to change the drain net, but I feltthat would be troublesome.

Troublesome is quite a fancy word so maybe something like annoying would be more casual!

When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor became soaked in water.

I thought I haved to change the drain net, but Iit felt troublesome.

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When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor soaked in water.


When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor became soaked in water.

When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor got soaked inwith water.

When I was taking a shower yesterday, my bathroom's drain got clogged and the floor soaked ingot flooded with water.

Soaked might implicate the floor has water retaining properties. i.e. a rug or a sponge.

I thought I have to change the drain net, but I felt troublesome.


I thought I haved to change the drain net, but Iit felt troublesome.

I thoughtink I have to change the drain net, but I feltthat would be troublesome.

Troublesome is quite a fancy word so maybe something like annoying would be more casual!

I thought I have to change the drain net, but I felt troublesome.

I might say something like "It was too troublesome" or "I felt too troubled to do it"

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