Sept. 6, 2022
Dragonfly
I've been interested in dragonflies recently.
While previous trip, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to countryside.
The end of August seems to be dragonfly season.
There were various kind of dragonflies, like orange one, blue and big one, blue and thin one, and black one etc...
It was like a dragonfly kingdom.
最近、トンボに興味があります。
この間の旅行では、田舎に行ったので、沢山トンボが見れました。
８月の下旬はトンボの季節みたいです。
オレンジ色のや青くて大きいの、青くて細いの、黒いのなどいろんな種類がいました。
まるでトンボの王国のようでした。
Dragonfly
I've beetaken an interested in dragonflies recently.
WhileDuring my previous trip, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to the countryside.
The end of August seems to be dragonfly season.
There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, blue and big ones, blue and thin ones, and black ones, etc...
It was like a dragonfly kingdom.
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いい話です。よく出来ました！
Sept. 7, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
WhileOn a previous trip to the countryside, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to countryside.
"While" is often used with a verb like saying "While I was visiting the countryside"
There were various kind of dragonflies, likeincluding orange ones, blue and big one, blue and thin one, andig blue ones, thin blue ones, black ones etc...
When giving general examples, we often use the plural forms.
If you want to emphasize that you only saw one of each kind, make sure to include the article and say "including an orange one, a big blue one etc..."
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It sounds like a lovely experience - I enjoyed the level of detail. Great work!
Sept. 7, 2022
Thank you for your corrections and comments.
Dragonfly
I've been interested in dragonflies recently.
While on a previous trip, I could seesaw many dragonflies, because I went to the countryside.
'i could see' could work here, but 'i saw' is more natural
The end of August seems to be dragonfly season.
There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, blueig and biglue ones, bluethin and thinblue one, and black ones etc...
colours would go after the adjectives here!
It was like a dragonfly kingdom.
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very good!
Sept. 7, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
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While previous trip, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to countryside. While on a previous trip, I 'i could see' could work here, but 'i saw' is more natural
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There were various kind of dragonflies, like orange one, blue and big one, blue and thin one, and black one etc... There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, b colours would go after the adjectives here! There were various kind of dragonflies, When giving general examples, we often use the plural forms. If you want to emphasize that you only saw one of each kind, make sure to include the article and say "including an orange one, a big blue one etc..." There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, blue and big ones, blue and thin ones, and black ones, etc. |
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