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Dragon Boat Festival

The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivals.

This festival has several legendary origins and one of them is: there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared about people's living conditions so much. He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people; he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river.

People feared that the fish and other animals in the river would eat his corpse. They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also, they took boats on the river to drive the fish away.

There are two basic traditional activities for the dragon boat festival. One is making and eating rice dumplings, which are popular all over the whole country. The other is racing dragon boats in rivers in the south part of China. The reason why the boats are named dragon boats? Because the boats used in the racing have dragon patterns in their appearance.

In my area, there are two local traditions for this festival. One is to cut wild wormwood and hang them on our gates. The other is to make small fragrant bags (using some fragrant plants) and hang them around children's necks. The reason people do these is to drive those harmful insects away to protect people. (During this festival, the weather has become hot, so the harmful insects become more active)

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Dragon Boat Festival

People feared that the fish and other animals in the river would eat his corpse.

In my area, there are two local traditions for this festival.

One is to cut wild wormwood and hang them on our gates.

The other is to make small fragrant bags (using some fragrant plants) and hang them around children's necks.

Dragon Boat Festival

This festival has several legendary origins and one of them is: there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared about people's living conditions so much.

He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people; he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river.

People feared that the fish and other animals in the river would eat his corpse.

There are two basic traditional activities for the dragon boat festival.

One is making and eating rice dumplings, which are popular all over the whole country.

The other is racing dragon boats in rivers in the south part of China.

Because the boats used in the racing have dragon patterns in their appearance.

In my area, there are two local traditions for this festival.

The other is to make small fragrant bags (using some fragrant plants) and hang them around children's necks.

The reason people do these is to drive those harmful insects away to protect people.

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Dragon Boat Festival

The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivals.

One is making and eating rice dumplings, which are popular all over the whole country.

The other is racing dragon boats in rivers in the south part of China.

In my area, there are two local traditions for this festival.

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People feared that the fish and other animals in the river would eat his corpse.

In my area, there are two local traditions for this festival.

One is to cut wild wormwood and hang them on our gates.

The other is to make small fragrant bags (using some fragrant plants) and hang them around children's necks.

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In my area, there are two local traditions for this festival.


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One is to cut wild wormwood and hang them on our gates.


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One is to cut wild wormwood and hang ithem on our gates. One is to cut wild wormwood and hang it on our gates.

Wormwood is an uncountable noun, so we use "it."

One is to cut wild wormwood and hang ithem on our gates. One is to cut wild wormwood and hang it on our gates.

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The other is to make small fragrant bags (using some fragrant plants) and hang them around children's necks.


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The other is to make small fragrantce bags (using some fragrant plants) and hang them around children's necks. The other is to make small fragrance bags (using some fragrant plants) and hang them around children's necks.

This is tricky to explain, but using the noun "fragrance" helps us understand these are special, traditional bags that are commonly made. They are fragrant, but here we want to say that they are supposed to be fragrant and are made in a particular way, so we say "fragrance bags."

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The reason people do these is to drive those harmful insects away to protect people.


The reason people do these is to drive those harmful insects away (in order) to protect people. The reason people do these is to drive those harmful insects away (in order) to protect people.

The reason people do theseis is to drive those harmful insects away toand protect people. The reason people do this is to drive harmful insects away and protect people.

Only use "those" if you have already mentioned harmful insects. In this case, it's the first time, so it's omitted.

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The reason people do these is to drive those harmful insects away toand protect people. The reason people do this to drive harmful insects away and protect people.

(During this festival, the weather has become hot, so the harmful insects become more active)


(During this festival, the weather has become hot, so the harmful insects becoame more active) (During this festival, the weather has become hot, so the harmful insects became more active)

(During this festival, the weather has become hot it's pretty hot outside, so the harmful insects become more active) (During this festival it's pretty hot outside, so the harmful insects become more active)

Usually we simply say "It's hot/cold today." when using hot or cold. However, words like "nice" or "stormy" are often accompanied by "get" or "become." I'm not sure why.

(During this festival, the weather has becomes hot, so the harmful insects become more active.) (During this festival, the weather becomes hot, so the harmful insects become more active.)

(During this festival, the weather has becomes hot, so the harmful insects become more active.) (During this festival, the weather becomes hot, so harmful insects become more active.)

Dragon Boat Festival


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The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivals.


The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatorya Chinese traditional festivals. The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is a Chinese traditional festival.

Suggestion: The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the Chinese traditional festivals, takes place of the tenth of June.

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The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivals. The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivals.

I'm not sure 'mandatory' is the right word. Are people forced to attend?

The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivalstraditional Chinese festivals that is a public holiday. The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the traditional Chinese festivals that is a public holiday.

The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivals. The tenth of June is the Dragon Boat Festival, which is one of the mandatory Chinese traditional festivals.

This festival has several legendary origins and one of them is: there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared about people's living conditions so much.


This festival has several legendary origins and one of them is: there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared a lot about people's living conditions so much. This festival has several legendary origins and one of them is: there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared a lot about people's living conditions.

This festival has several legendary origins and one of them is:Its origin is attributed to several legends. For example, there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared much about people's living conditions so much. Its origin is attributed to several legends. For example, there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared much about people's living conditions.

"so much" should be reserved for informal communication.

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This festival has several legendary origins and o. One of them is: that there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared deeply about people's living conditions so much. This festival has several legendary origins. One of them is that there was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared deeply about people's living conditions.

This festival has several legendary origins and one of them is: t. There was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared about people's living conditions so much. This festival has several legendary origin. There was a very famous poet in ancient China named Quyuan, who cared about people's living conditions so much.

They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also, they took boats on the river to drive the fish away.


They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also, they took boats on the river to drive the fish away. They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and took boats on the river to drive the fish away.

They made a lot ofmany rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also, they took boats on the river got in their boats to drive the fish away. They made many rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also got in their boats to drive the fish away.

Again, I recommend "a lot" for informal communication.

They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also, they tookrode boats on the river to drive the fish away. They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also, they rode boats on the river to drive the fish away.

They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers, and also, theythey also took boats onto the river to drive the fish away. They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the river, and they also took boats onto the river to drive the fish away.

They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and also, they took boats on the river to drive the fish away. They made a lot of rice dumplings to feed the fish in the rivers and they took boats on the river to drive the fish away.

There are two basic traditional activities for the dragon boat festival.


There are two basic traditional activities for the dDragon bBoat fFestival. There are two basic traditional activities for the Dragon Boat Festival.

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There are two basic traditional activities for the dDragon bBoat fFestival. There are two traditional activities for the Dragon Boat Festival.

There are two basic traditional activities for the dDragon bBoat fFestival. There are two basic traditional activities for the Dragon Boat Festival.

One is making and eating rice dumplings, which are popular all over the whole country.


One is making and eating rice dumplings, which are popular all over the whole country. One is making and eating rice dumplings, which are popular all over the country.

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One is making and eating rice dumplings, which areis popular all over the whole country. One is making and eating rice dumplings, which is popular over the whole country.

The other is racing dragon boats in rivers in the south part of China.


The other is racing dragon boats in rivers in the southern part of China. The other is racing dragon boats in rivers in the southern part of China.

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The reason why the boats are named dragon boats?


The reason why the boats are namWhy are they called dragon boats? Why are they called dragon boats?

TAs for the reason why the boats are named dragon boats? As for the reason why the boats are named dragon boats?

The reason whyWhy are the boats are namcalled dragon boats? Why are the boats called dragon boats?

Because the boats used in the racing have dragon patterns in their appearance.


Because the boats used in the racinge have dragon patterns ion itheir appearance. Because the boats used in the race have dragon patterns on it.

BIt's because the boats used in the racinges have dragconic patterns in their appearance. It's because the boats used in the races have draconic patterns.

In spoken English, starting with "Because" is natural, but you can't use it to start a sentence in an article.

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BIt's because the boats used in the racinge have dragon patterns ion their appearancem. It's because the boats used in the race have dragon patterns on them.

He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people; he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river.


He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people;, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river. He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river.

He couldn't stand the darkcorrupt political rules and the terrible living conditions of the people;, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river. He couldn't stand the corrupt political rules and terrible living conditions of the people, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river.

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He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people;, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river. He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river.

He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people;, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river. He couldn't stand the dark political rules and the terrible living conditions of people, so he committed suicide by diving into the Miluo river.

People feared that the fish and other animals in the river would eat his corpse.


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