Jan. 7, 2021
empathy
There is a make-up shop called SASA near my home. I need their eyebrow pencil there once. A customer fainted suddenly, during my purchase. The clerk kept apologizing to me and the customer was taken away by the ambulance. She sent me a gift, after I paid. She did not actually apologize, because the customer fainting was not her fault , but she wanted to create empathy and a connection with me to show respect. But, she didn’t understand my needs clearly. I already stated that I just need an eyebrow pencil under 60 dollars, but she still recommended an eyebrow pencil around 100 dollars. She finally understood what I meant and recommended another eyebrow pencil. The price was just within my budget. I believe it would have improved the experience, if she could understand faster.
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empathy
There is a make-up shop called SASA near my home.
I needed to buy their eyebrow pencil there once. I needed to buy their eyebrow pencil there once.
should be in past tense
A customer fainted suddenly, during my purchase.
The clerk kept apologizing to me and the customer was taken away by the ambulance.
She sentgave me a gift, after I paid.
She gave me a gift, after I paid.
She did not actually apologize, because the customer fainting was not her fault , but she wanted to create empathyise and create a connection with me to show respect.
She did not actually apologize, because the customer fainting was not her fault , but she wanted to empathise and create a connection with me to show respect.
But, she didn’t understand my needs clearly.
I already stated that I just need an eyebrow pencil under 60 dollars, but she still recommended an eyebrow pencil around 100 dollars.
She finally understood what I meant and recommended another eyebrow pencil.
The price was just within my budget.
I believe itI would have improved thehad a better experience, if she could understand faster.
I believe I would have had a better experience, if she could understand faster.
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There is a make-up shop called SASA near my home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I need their eyebrow pencil there once. I needed to buy their eyebrow pencil there once. I needed to buy their eyebrow pencil there once. should be in past tense |
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A customer fainted suddenly, during my purchase. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The clerk kept apologizing to me and the customer was taken away by the ambulance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She sent me a gift, after I paid.
She |
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She did not actually apologize, because the customer fainting was not her fault , but she wanted to create empathy and a connection with me to show respect.
She did not actually apologize, because the customer fainting was not her fault , but she wanted to |
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But, she didn’t understand my needs clearly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I already stated that I just need an eyebrow pencil under 60 dollars, but she still recommended an eyebrow pencil around 100 dollars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She finally understood what I meant and recommended another eyebrow pencil. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The price was just within my budget. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I believe it would have improved the experience, if she could understand faster.
I believe |
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