Sometimes I would like alsoalso like a salty breakfast, but thaen I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me. Sometimes I would also like a salty breakfast, but then I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me.

You could also say "Sometimes I want a salty breakfast..." for simplicity.

Sometimes I would also like also a salty breakfast, but thaen I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me. Sometimes I would also like a salty breakfast, but then I remember that the smell of eggs in the morning disturbs me.

Sometimes I would also like also a salty breakfast, but thaen I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me. Sometimes I would also like a salty breakfast, but then I remember that the smell of eggs in the morning disturbs me.

Sometimes, I wouldalso like also a salty breakfast, but thaen I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me. Sometimes, I also like salty breakfast, but then I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me.

Sometimes, I would like also a salty breakfast, but thaen I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me. Sometimes, I would like a salty breakfast, but then I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me.

Sometimes I woul'd like alsoto have a salty breakfast but than I remember that the smell of the eggs in the morning disturbs me. Sometimes I'd like to have a salty breakfast but than I remember that the smell of eggs in the morning disturbs me.

When I go in ato cafes for having breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes andlong with a croissant or a donut. When I go to cafes for breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes along with a croissant or a donut.

"To go to" a location usually indicates you are going inside it.

When I go into a cafe for having breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes and, as well as a croissant or a donut. When I go to a cafe for breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice, as well as a croissant or a donut.

When I go into a cafe forto havinge breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes and a croissant, or a donut. When I go to a cafe to have breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes and a croissant, or a donut.

When I go into a cafe for having breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes, and a croissant or a donut. When I go to a cafe for breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes, and a croissant or a donut.

Oxford commas - read about them if you are unfamiliar. Not alot of people use them but I do and it is a great tool.

When I go in a cafe for having breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes and a croissant or a donut. When I go in a cafe for breakfast, I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes and a croissant or a donut.

When I go in a cafe forto havinge breakfast I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes and a croissant or a donut. When I go in a cafe to have breakfast I often order a cappuccino or ginseng with ice cubes and a croissant or a donut.

Maria’s bBreakfast Maria’s Breakfast

You want to capitalize all major words in a title. But in this case, you may want to use "My Breakfast" unless I'm wrong in assuming you are Maria.

Maria’s bBreakfast Maria’s Breakfast

Usually for breakfast, I love to eating milk and cereals. Usually for breakfast, I love to eat cereal.

In English, it's typically implied that one eats cereal with milk.

Usually for breakfast I love eating milk and cereals. Usually for breakfast I love eating milk and cereal.

Usually for breakfast I love eatto dringk milk and eat cereals. Usually for breakfast I love to drink milk and eat cereal.

Milk is a liquid (in this case, a drink/beverage), so we use “to drink.” You don’t have to make cereal plural.

Usually, for breakfast, I love eating milk and cereals. Usually, for breakfast, I love eating milk and cereals.

To sound more natural, I added commas (great tool for a beginner)

Usually for breakfast, I love eating milk and cereals. Usually for breakfast, I love eating milk and cereals.

Usually for breakfast I love eating milk and cereals. Usually for breakfast I love eating milk and cereal.