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July 12, 2025

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Downloading Music Or Films Without Paying Is A Crime

Nowadays, it is quite popular to download music, films, series, etc without paying and for free. Some people think that it is a some kind of a crime, other ones are sure that it is not. I want to explain why we can say that this is a crime as well as stealing.
Firstly, if something costs a money, that means you have to pay to get it. You can't get it for free. For instance, you want to buy some products from a shop, and of course you have to pay the money. You never go and steal it. Same with music and films. If you got it for free, it would count as a theft.
Secondly, it shows disrespect to people who worked on these projects, regardless of the music or the film industry. In addition, illegal downloads affect artists, actors, musicians and others who made a lot of effort. Everyone has the right to get as much recognition for their works as they expect.
To sum up, I believe paying for the music you are listening to, or paying for the films and series you are watching has to be a common thing, and is really significant and important to a team who worked hard to make it all.

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Downloading Music Or Films Without Paying Is A Crime

Nowadays, it is quite popular to download music, films, series, etc without paying and for free.

Add "for free" is a bit redundant, so I think the sentence might sound better without it.

Some people think that it is a some kind of a crime,; other ones are sure that it is not.

You technically shouldn't connect two independent clauses with a comma because it's a punctuation error called "comma splicing." You can use a semicolon (;) instead, like how I corrected the sentence to. There's other ways of fixing it too, which you can find if you do a quick Google search of "comma splice."

I want to explain why we can say that this is a crime as well as stealing.

Your original sentence is good, but if you want it to be more concise, you could try "I want to explain why this should be called stealing."

Firstly, if something costs a money, that means you have to pay to get it.

You can't get it for free.

For instance, if you want to buy some products from a shop, and of course you have to pay the money.

You never go and steal it.

Same with music and films.

If you got it for free, it would count as a theft.

Secondly, it shows disrespect to the people who worked on these projects, regardless of whether we're talking about the music or the film industry.

I think it sounds better as "the people," since you're pointing out a specific group of people. Then, I added "whether we're talking about..." to clarify what you might have meant by "regardless of."

In addition, illegal downloads affect artists, actors, musicians and others who madeput in a lot of effort.

Everyone has the right to get as much recognition for their works as they expect.

To sum up, I believe paying for the music you are listening to, or paying for the films and series you are watching has to be a common thing, and that it is really significant and important to a team who worked hard to make it all.

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anelll

July 12, 2025

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Thank you so muchhh

Downloading Music Or Films Without Paying Is A Crime


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Nowadays, it is quite popular to download music, films, series, etc without paying and for free.


Nowadays, it is quite popular to download music, films, series, etc without paying and for free.

Add "for free" is a bit redundant, so I think the sentence might sound better without it.

Some people think that it is a some kind of a crime, other ones are sure that it is not.


Some people think that it is a some kind of a crime,; other ones are sure that it is not.

You technically shouldn't connect two independent clauses with a comma because it's a punctuation error called "comma splicing." You can use a semicolon (;) instead, like how I corrected the sentence to. There's other ways of fixing it too, which you can find if you do a quick Google search of "comma splice."

I want to explain why we can say that this is a crime as well as stealing.


I want to explain why we can say that this is a crime as well as stealing.

Your original sentence is good, but if you want it to be more concise, you could try "I want to explain why this should be called stealing."

Firstly, if something costs a money, that means you have to pay to get it.


Firstly, if something costs a money, that means you have to pay to get it.

You never go and steal it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Same with music and films.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you got it for free, it would count as a theft.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Secondly, it shows disrespect to people who worked on these projects, regardless of the music or the film industry.


Secondly, it shows disrespect to the people who worked on these projects, regardless of whether we're talking about the music or the film industry.

I think it sounds better as "the people," since you're pointing out a specific group of people. Then, I added "whether we're talking about..." to clarify what you might have meant by "regardless of."

In addition, illegal downloads affect artists, actors, musicians and others who made a lot of effort.


In addition, illegal downloads affect artists, actors, musicians and others who madeput in a lot of effort.

Everyone has the right to get as much recognition for their works as they expect.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To sum up, I believe paying for the music you are listening to, or paying for the films and series you are watching has to be a common thing, and is really significant and important to a team who worked hard to make it all.


To sum up, I believe paying for the music you are listening to, or paying for the films and series you are watching has to be a common thing, and that it is really significant and important to a team who worked hard to make it all.

You can't get it for free.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For instance, you want to buy some products from a shop, and of course you have to pay the money.


For instance, if you want to buy some products from a shop, and of course you have to pay the money.

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