April 14, 2024
Dormitories Magnify Suffering(1)
Did you taste the feeling of sleeping by compulsion (if you have something important to do in the next day, you must enforce you sleep to get energy). In the past, I always took owning a whole period of sleeping for granted. when I felt tired, I naturally fell asleep. It was a trifle that I never noticed. But there was a change recently. I took up losing sleep as a result of this attitude and some other reasons.
Dormitory Magnify Suffering
I am not sure what you mean by this title. Did you mean this: Dormitory magnifies suffering
As in dormitory, or whatever that may entail, amplifies or intensifies suffering?
Did you taste the feeling of sleeping by compulsion (if you have something important to do in the next day, you must enforce your sleep to get energy).
Just to make it flow better.
In the past, I always took owning a whole period of sleeping for granted.
when I felt tired, I naturally fell asleep.
It was a trifle that I never noticed.
But there was a change recently.
I took up losing sleep as a result of this attitude and some other reasons.
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Overall good job. Just some little changes to make it flow a little better.
Dormitoryies Magnify Suffering
DidHave you tasted the feeling of sleeping by compulsion (if you have something important to do in the next day, you must enforcesure that you sleep to get enough energy).
In the past, I always took owning a whole period of sleeping for granted.
when I felt tired, I naturally fell asleep.
It was a trifle that I never noticed.
But there was a change recently.
I took upstarted losing sleep as a result of this attitude and some other reasons.
This sentence is grammatically correct, but it hasn't quite managed to clarify what "attitude" you're talking about.
Dormitory MagnifySleeping Intensifies Suffering
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Great! Your grammar is good but your sentences sound awkward so you should work on that :)
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Did you taste the feeling of sleeping by compulsion (if you have something important to do in the next day, you must enforce you sleep to get energy).
The sentence is somewhat grammatically right yet quite awkward
Did you taste the feeling of sleeping by compulsion (if you have something important to do Just to make it flow better. |
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when I felt tired, I naturally fell asleep.
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I took up losing sleep as a result of this attitude and some other reasons. I I This sentence is grammatically correct, but it hasn't quite managed to clarify what "attitude" you're talking about. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Dormitory Magnify Suffering
Dormitor Dormitory Magnify Suffering I am not sure what you mean by this title. Did you mean this: Dormitory magnifies suffering As in dormitory, or whatever that may entail, amplifies or intensifies suffering? |
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