Sept. 15, 2020
Doraemon Park
I haven’t play mobile games for more than 3 months.
Today I used line to chatting with friends.
While waiting for the reply.
I take a look at the game page and find out this game.
So, I installed the game and start to play.
That is nightmare begin!
This game is so addictive to play.
Once I started I can’t stop playing.
My battery was from 90% down to 9%!
When I return home I charge my mobile phone immediately.
Now, I am not playing this game.
Because I know if I start to play again.
I will never stop.
I will delete the game and you should not play this game too!
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I haven’t played mobile games for more than 3 months.
Today I used lLine to chatting with friends.
While waiting for the reply.,
I takeook a look at the game page and find outound this game.
So, I installed the game and started to play.
That iswas the beginning of a nightmare begin!
This game is so addictive to play.
Once I started I can’ouldn't stop playing.
My battery was down from 90% down to 9%!
When I returned home I charged my mobile phone immediately.
Now, I am not playing this game any more.
You were technically not wrong, but this way it implies better that you were playing before and then you stopped.
Because I know if I start to play again.,
I will never stop.
I will delete the game and you should not play this game tooeither!
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Because I know if I start to play again. Because I know if I start to play again |
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I will never stop. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will delete the game and you should not play this game too! I will delete the game and you should not play this game |
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Doraemon Park |
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I haven’t play mobile games for more than 3 months. I haven’t played mobile games for more than 3 months. |
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Today I used line to chatting with friends. Today I used |
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While waiting for the reply. While waiting for the reply |
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I take a look at the game page and find out this game. I t |
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So, I installed the game and start to play. So, I installed the game and started to play. |
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That is nightmare begin! That |
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This game is so addictive to play. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Once I started I can’t stop playing. Once I started I c |
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My battery was from 90% down to 9%! My battery was down from 90% |
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When I return home I charge my mobile phone immediately. When I returned home I charged my mobile phone immediately. |
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Now, I am not playing this game.
You were technically not wrong, but this way it implies better that you were playing before and then you stopped. |
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