June 8, 2024
Donuts
Too much sugar makes me tired. But today I ate two donuts because Mister Donut collaborated with Pokémon. I’m not a fan of Pokémon, and the donuts didn’t taste good compared to their price. But don’t special products always give people a kind of excitement? Convenience stores usually have specials for every season or festival; they give us a little joy in our ordinary life.
ButHowever, today I ate two donuts because Mister Donut collaborated with Pokémon.
I’m not a fan of Pokémon, and the donuts didn’t taste good compared to their. They also had a high price.
Convenience stores usually have specials for every season or festival; they give usbring a little joy into our ordinary life.ves.
June 11, 2024
Thank you so much!
Donuts
Too much sugar makes me tired.
But today I ate two donuts because Mister Donut collaborated with Pokémon.
I’m not a fan of Pokémon, and the donuts didn’t taste good compared tofor their price.
Use "for" instead of "compared" as compare is when looking at two or more items (e.g. Item A is more expensive compared to that of Item B). However, in this case, price is referring to donut, not comparing two of the same things.
But don’t special products always give people a kind of excitement?
Convenience stores usually have specials for every season or festival; they give us a little joy in our ordinary life.
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June 9, 2024
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Donuts
Too much sugar makes me tired.
But today I ate two donuts, because Mister Donut collaborated with Pokémon.
I’m not a fan of Pokémon, and the donuts didn’t taste good compared to their price.
But don’t special products always give people a / some kind of excitement?
Convenience stores usually have specials for every season or festival; they give us a little joy in our ordinary life.
June 9, 2024
Thank you so much!
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