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ohamu

March 11, 2025

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Don’t make excuses

I want fulfilling days.
So I decided to study English.
But I can’t going well.
First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep long time.
Second, I don’t use English ordinary day so it’s difficult to keep a motivation .
Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned before.
I’ll start working hard again from today.

Corrections

Don’t mMake eExcuses

Remember the capitalization rule for your title.

I want to have fulfilling days.

Added “to have” for clarity and to make the sentence sound more natural.

But I can’t going well’m not making good progress.

“Can’t going well” is grammatically incorrect. "I'm not making good progress" is clearer and more natural.

First, I’m feel very sleepy every day and Itend to sleep for a long time.

"Everyday" should be “every day” (two words), as it refers to something that happens each day.
“Sleep long time” sounds awkward, so I changed it to "sleep for a long time" for smoother phrasing.

Second, I don’t use English ordinary dayin my daily life, so it’s difficult to keep astay motivation .ed

"Ordinary day" was replaced with "daily life" for clarity.
"Keep a motivation" was rephrased to "stay motivated" for more natural phrasing.

Finally, I make excuses, like the two I mentioned before.earlier

“Before” was changed to “earlier” for better flow in this context.
I also added a comma to separate sentences to make it clear.

Feedback

Learning a foreign language is really hard. I am also currently learning a new language, and I must say to you that on some days, I just want to shut down my laptop and scroll through social media or sleep. I just motivate myself that someday, the future me will thank myself for learning a new language and getting out of my comfort zone. You can do it!

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ohamu

March 12, 2025

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Thank you so much!
I’ll try my best.

But I can’it’s not going well.

First, I’m very sleepy every day and I sleep a long time.

Second, I don’t use English ordinaevery day so it’s difficult to keep amaintain motivation .

ohamu's avatar
ohamu

March 11, 2025

1

Thank you so much.

Don’t make excuses

I want fulfilling days.

So I decided to study English.

But I can’it's not going well.

First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep long timea lot.

A native would more likely say "I'm very tired everyday" rather than I'm very sleepy.

Second, I don’t use English ordinary daregularly so it’s difficult to keep astay motivationed .

You could also say "it's difficult to maintain my motivation".

Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned beforabove.

I’ll start working hard again from, starting today.

Feedback

Well done! Keep it up and you will improve in no time!

ohamu's avatar
ohamu

March 11, 2025

1

Thank you so much!
I’ll keep going.

Don’t make excuses


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Don’t mMake eExcuses

Remember the capitalization rule for your title.

I want fulfilling days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to have fulfilling days.

Added “to have” for clarity and to make the sentence sound more natural.

So I decided to study English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I can’t going well.


But I can’it's not going well.

But I can’it’s not going well.

But I can’t going well’m not making good progress.

“Can’t going well” is grammatically incorrect. "I'm not making good progress" is clearer and more natural.

First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep long time.


First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep long timea lot.

A native would more likely say "I'm very tired everyday" rather than I'm very sleepy.

First, I’m very sleepy every day and I sleep a long time.

First, I’m feel very sleepy every day and Itend to sleep for a long time.

"Everyday" should be “every day” (two words), as it refers to something that happens each day. “Sleep long time” sounds awkward, so I changed it to "sleep for a long time" for smoother phrasing.

Second, I don’t use English ordinary day so it’s difficult to keep a motivation .


Second, I don’t use English ordinary daregularly so it’s difficult to keep astay motivationed .

You could also say "it's difficult to maintain my motivation".

Second, I don’t use English ordinaevery day so it’s difficult to keep amaintain motivation .

Second, I don’t use English ordinary dayin my daily life, so it’s difficult to keep astay motivation .ed

"Ordinary day" was replaced with "daily life" for clarity. "Keep a motivation" was rephrased to "stay motivated" for more natural phrasing.

Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned before.


Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned beforabove.

Finally, I make excuses, like the two I mentioned before.earlier

“Before” was changed to “earlier” for better flow in this context. I also added a comma to separate sentences to make it clear.

I’ll start working hard again from today.


I’ll start working hard again from, starting today.

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