We did not take care of it very carefully, justonly put it in the corner and watered it occasionally. We did not take care of it very carefully, only put it in the corner and watered it occasionally.

WYet, when I was cleaning the homuse today, I suddenly found that it was about to bloom. Yet, when I was cleaning the house today, I suddenly found that it was about to bloom.

Consider adding a word like "yet" to signal that something unexpected has happened.

I sat next to it and counted the buds, and —there were more than 20 budstwenty! I sat next to it and counted the buds—there were more than twenty!

I seem to feel itt felt like it was saying to me: " Hi, dear., It felt like it was saying to me: "Hi dear,

I have been here with you all theis time, y. You are not alone." I have been here with you all this time. You are not alone."

My tears fell, a. At the beginning of this winter, this pot of free plants are is bringing a touch of beautiful color to my home. My tears fell. At the beginning of this winter, this pot of free plants is bringing a touch of beautiful color to my home.

The word "pot" is singular, so you should use "is" instead of "are". The "a touch of" addition is meant to be stylistic; technically it's correct without this phrase, but I think it sounds more natural this way.