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kazu

June 4, 2020

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Dog run

I took my friend's dogs to the dog run today. They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea. These comes from milktea as you might think, because my friend really like milktea. It's funny. They are lively and like to play outside, so they looked really fun. In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for fear that I might drop dog. And I thought spending time with dogs can heal mind. I had a blast today!

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Dog runRace

I suppose you mean "dog race", there is no such thing as a "dog run".

I took my friend's dogs to thea dog runace today.

These names comes from milktea as you might thinkhave thought, because my friend really likes milktea.

They are lively and like to play outside, so they looked really funit was fun to watch them.

In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for due to fear that I might drop the dog.

And I thoughI think that spending time with dogs can heal the mind.

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Dogs are such cool creatures!

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kazu

June 5, 2020

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I think so too.
Thx!

Dog runPark

I assume you mean the word ドッグラン (dog run). We call them dog parks. :-)

I took my friend's dogs to the dog runpark today.

They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea.

These names comes from milk tea as you might think, because my friend really like milktea.have guessed. My friend really likes milk tea.¶
(Alternative: My friend named her dogs after milk tea because she really likes it as you might have guessed.)

It's funny.

They are lively and like to play outside, so they looked reallylike they were really having fun.

In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for fearafraid that I mightwould drop dogit.

And I thoughtink(?) spending time with dogs can heal the mind.

If you thought it, do you no longer believe that spending time with dogs can heal the mind. It sounds like you want to say here: "And I thought spending time with dogs can heal the mind, but I was wrong."

I had a blast today!

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Awe, how cute. It sounds like you had a great time!

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kazu

June 5, 2020

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I take it you like dogs too!
Thx!

Dog runRace

I've never heard of "dog run" before, only "dog race" or "dog show"

Dog race -> where the dogs run
Dog show -> usually a beauty or talent show with the dogs

I took my friend's dogs to the dog runace today.

They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea.

These names comes from milktea as you might thinkhave thought, because my friend really likes milktea.

It's funny.

They are lively and they like to play outside, so they looked really fun.it was really fun to watch them.

"They looked really fun" sounds awkward, I don't think someone can "look fun"
You can say as an alternative....
".. so it was really fun to watch them."
"... so they looked like they were having fun."

In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous forwith the fear that I might drop the dog.

Andlso, I thought spending time with dogs can heal the mind.

I had a blast today!

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Sounds like a really fun day!

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kazu

June 5, 2020

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Thx!

Dog run


Dog runRace

I've never heard of "dog run" before, only "dog race" or "dog show" Dog race -> where the dogs run Dog show -> usually a beauty or talent show with the dogs

Dog runPark

I assume you mean the word ドッグラン (dog run). We call them dog parks. :-)

Dog runRace

I suppose you mean "dog race", there is no such thing as a "dog run".

I took my friend's dogs to the dog run today.


I took my friend's dogs to the dog runace today.

I took my friend's dogs to the dog runpark today.

I took my friend's dogs to thea dog runace today.

They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea.


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These comes from milktea as you might think, because my friend really like milktea.


These names comes from milktea as you might thinkhave thought, because my friend really likes milktea.

These names comes from milk tea as you might think, because my friend really like milktea.have guessed. My friend really likes milk tea.¶
(Alternative: My friend named her dogs after milk tea because she really likes it as you might have guessed.)

These names comes from milktea as you might thinkhave thought, because my friend really likes milktea.

It's funny.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They are lively and like to play outside, so they looked really fun.


They are lively and they like to play outside, so they looked really fun.it was really fun to watch them.

"They looked really fun" sounds awkward, I don't think someone can "look fun" You can say as an alternative.... ".. so it was really fun to watch them." "... so they looked like they were having fun."

They are lively and like to play outside, so they looked reallylike they were really having fun.

They are lively and like to play outside, so they looked really funit was fun to watch them.

In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for fear that I might drop dog.


In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous forwith the fear that I might drop the dog.

In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for fearafraid that I mightwould drop dogit.

In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for due to fear that I might drop the dog.

And I thought spending time with dogs can heal mind.


Andlso, I thought spending time with dogs can heal the mind.

And I thoughtink(?) spending time with dogs can heal the mind.

If you thought it, do you no longer believe that spending time with dogs can heal the mind. It sounds like you want to say here: "And I thought spending time with dogs can heal the mind, but I was wrong."

And I thoughI think that spending time with dogs can heal the mind.

I had a blast today!


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