Feb. 21, 2021
Dog Park
I took my friends' dogs to the dog park today. They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea. As you might guess, these names come from milk tea because my friend really likes the drink. It's so funny. They are energetic and like to play outside, so it looked like they were really having fun. In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for fear that I might drop the dog. Additionally, I noticed new one thing. That's spending time with dogs can heal the mind. They have mysterious power to cheer people up. I had a blast today.
Dog Park
I took my friends's dogs to the dog park today.
Friends' = belonging to multiple friends.
Friend's = belonging to one friend.
They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea.
As you might guess, these names come from milk tea because my friend really likes the drink.
It's so funny.
They are energetic and like to play outside, so it looked like they were really having fun.
In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for fear that I might drop the dog.
Additionally, I noticed onew o new thing.
Even better: "Additionally, I noticed something new."
That's spending time with dogs can heal the mind.
'Heal the mind' isn't commonly used, though a native speaker will know what you mean. 'Can be good for your mental health' or 'can heal the soul' are two good alternatives.
They have a mysterious power to cheer people up.
I had a blast today.
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This is very good!
Feb. 22, 2021
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Dog Park This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I took my friends' dogs to the dog park today. I took my friend Friends' = belonging to multiple friends. Friend's = belonging to one friend. |
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They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As you might guess, these names come from milk tea because my friend really likes the drink. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's so funny. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are energetic and like to play outside, so it looked like they were really having fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous for fear that I might drop the dog. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, I noticed new one thing. Additionally, I noticed one Even better: "Additionally, I noticed something new." |
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That's spending time with dogs can heal the mind. That's spending time with dogs can heal the mind. 'Heal the mind' isn't commonly used, though a native speaker will know what you mean. 'Can be good for your mental health' or 'can heal the soul' are two good alternatives. |
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They have mysterious power to cheer people up. They have a mysterious power to cheer people up. |
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I had a blast today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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