June 5, 2020
Dog park
I'll write again. Please rate this compared to the last one. I took my friend's dogs to the dog park today. They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea. These names come from milk tea as you may guess, because my friend really likes milk tea. It's funny. They are energetic and like to play outside, so they looked like they were really having fun. In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous that I might drop the dog. Also I think spending time with dogs can heal the mind. I had a blast today.
Dog park
I'll write again.
Please rate this compared to the last one.
I took my friend's dogs to the dog park today.
They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea.
These names come from milk tea as you may guess, because my friend really likes milk tea.
It's funny.
They are energetic and like to play outside, so they looked like they were really having fun.
In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous that I might drop the dog.
Also I think spending time with dogs can heal the mind.
I had a blast today.
Dog park
I'll write this prompt again.
It's a minor correction, but it makes your sentence clearer.
Please rate this compared to the last one.
I took my friend's dogs to the dog park today.
They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea.
These names come from milk tea, as you mayight guess, because my friend really likes milk teathe drink.
Also a minor correction, but replacing "milk tea" with "the drink" makes the sentence more varied and less repetitive.
It's funny.
They are energetic and like to play outside, so they looked like they were really having fun.
In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous that I mightwould drop ithe dog.
Same correction as the "milk tea" part; it's just to make the sentence sound smoother.
Also, I think spending time with dogs can heal the mind.
I had a blast today.
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I'll write again. I'll write this prompt again. It's a minor correction, but it makes your sentence clearer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please rate this compared to the last one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I took my friend's dogs to the dog park today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are toy poodles and their names are Milk and Tea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These names come from milk tea as you may guess, because my friend really likes milk tea. These names come from milk tea, as you m Also a minor correction, but replacing "milk tea" with "the drink" makes the sentence more varied and less repetitive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's funny. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are energetic and like to play outside, so they looked like they were really having fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous that I might drop the dog. In fact, I carried a dog for the first time today, so I was very nervous that I Same correction as the "milk tea" part; it's just to make the sentence sound smoother. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also I think spending time with dogs can heal the mind. Also, I think spending time with dogs can heal the mind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had a blast today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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