Aug. 16, 2021
Does the morality depend on religion?
There are divided opinions about the relationship between morality and religion. some people think that everyone has the capability of choosing among the good or the bad, without religion need. Others think that we need a leadership and specific rules to understand what is good or bad.
The first people group. They support their view on the affirmation that there are good people being atheism and bad being religious. Moreover, others think that such thing like a good and evil are social fantasy.
The second group. They perceive a conscience tied to the will of God, for this reason, we feel sad when we do something wrong or we feel peace when we do the correct thing. They feel the need of read the holy book and congregate to receive the God message and behave coherent with the will of God. Moreover, they think that without God or their church there would not be an appropriate selection within the good and evil, because everyone would take their decision on their own perception of good and evil, for example, some people would kill or rape, because to them it is correct.
In conclusion, Topics like moral is not easy of developing because, there are many views and subtopics about it. For some people morality is a fantasy and for others, morality comes of God will.
Does the morality depend on religion?
There are divided opinions about the relationship between morality and religion.
sSome people think that everyone has the capability of choosing among the good or the bad, without needing religion need.
Others think that we need a leadership and specific rules to understand what is good or bad.
Leadership is an indivisible quality so you don't say "a leadership" and instead "some leadership".
The first people group.
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They first group support their view on the affirmationby pointing out that there are good people beingwho are atheismts and bad beingpeople who are religious.
Moreover, others think that such things like a good and evil are social fantasyies.
The second group.
Merge with next sentence.
They second group perceive a conscience tied to the will of God and, for this reason, we feel sbad when we do something wrong or we feel peace when we do the correct thing.
If "bad" is not what you were aiming for, then you might have meant "guilty".
They feel the need tof read the holy book and congregate to receive the God's message and behave coherentaccording with the will of God.
Moreover, they think that without God or their church there would not be an appropriate selection within thejudgement between good and evil, because everyone would tmake their decisions on their own perception of good and evil, f. For example, some people would kill or rape, because to them it is correct.
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In conclusion, Ttopics like moral isity are not easy of developingto discuss because, there are many views and subtopics about it.
For some people morality is a fantasy and, for others, morality comes out of God's will.
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The first people group.
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Does the morality depend on religion? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are divided opinions about the relationship between morality and religion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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some people think that everyone has the capability of choosing among the good or the bad, without religion need.
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Others think that we need a leadership and specific rules to understand what is good or bad. Others think that we need Leadership is an indivisible quality so you don't say "a leadership" and instead "some leadership". |
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They support their view on the affirmation that there are good people being atheism and bad being religious. The |
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Moreover, others think that such thing like a good and evil are social fantasy. Moreover, others think that such things like |
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The second group.
Merge with next sentence. |
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They perceive a conscience tied to the will of God, for this reason, we feel sad when we do something wrong or we feel peace when we do the correct thing. The If "bad" is not what you were aiming for, then you might have meant "guilty". |
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They feel the need of read the holy book and congregate to receive the God message and behave coherent with the will of God. They feel the need to |
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Moreover, they think that without God or their church there would not be an appropriate selection within the good and evil, because everyone would take their decision on their own perception of good and evil, for example, some people would kill or rape, because to them it is correct. Moreover, they think that without God or their church there would not be an appropriate That's a bit of a run-on sentence. Breaking it up is a good idea. |
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In conclusion, Topics like moral is not easy of developing because, there are many views and subtopics about it. In conclusion, |
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For some people morality is a fantasy and for others, morality comes of God will. For some people morality is a fantasy and, for others, morality comes out of God's will. |
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