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hebereke

Nov. 5, 2021

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Does the internet promote democracy?

I think the internet does not promote democracy in the democratic countries. I admit that the internet played an important role in the establishment of it, but once the democratic government starts, the internet turns into the hinderance of the democracy. For example, in the U.S. SNS is playing a role to incite people now. People no longer read newspaper or use other old media to get information, they use the internet media. Some of them are credible, but most of the media spread some information that is not confirmed. The problem is that the people tend to believe what they saw first, and the speed of the internet media contribute to fake news spreading faster than the fact. Because the widespread of fact is the foundation of democracy, the internet does not promote democracy today.

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Does the internet promote democracy?

I think the internet does not promote democracy in the democratic countries.

I admit that the internet played an important role in the establishment of iat first, but once the democratic government starts, the internet turns into thea hinderance of the democracy.

A lot of commas- maybe break up the sentence

For example, in the U.S., SNS is playing a role to incite people now.

People no longer read newspapers or use other old media to get information, they use the internet media.

Some of them are credible, but most of the media spread somes information that is not confirmed.

The problem is that the people tend to believe what they sawee first, and the speed of the internet media contributes to fake news spreading faster than the facts.

Because the widespread of fact isfacts are the foundation of democracy, the internet does not promote democracy today.

Does the internet promote democracy?


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I think the internet does not promote democracy in the democratic countries.


I think the internet does not promote democracy in the democratic countries.

I admit that the internet played an important role in the establishment of it, but once the democratic government starts, the internet turns into the hinderance of the democracy.


I admit that the internet played an important role in the establishment of iat first, but once the democratic government starts, the internet turns into thea hinderance of the democracy.

A lot of commas- maybe break up the sentence

For example, in the U.S. SNS is playing a role to incite people now.


For example, in the U.S., SNS is playing a role to incite people now.

People no longer read newspaper or use other old media to get information, they use the internet media.


People no longer read newspapers or use other old media to get information, they use the internet media.

Some of them are credible, but most of the media spread some information that is not confirmed.


Some of them are credible, but most of the media spread somes information that is not confirmed.

The problem is that the people tend to believe what they saw first, and the speed of the internet media contribute to fake news spreading faster than the fact.


The problem is that the people tend to believe what they sawee first, and the speed of the internet media contributes to fake news spreading faster than the facts.

Because the widespread of fact is the foundation of democracy, the internet does not promote democracy today.


Because the widespread of fact isfacts are the foundation of democracy, the internet does not promote democracy today.

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