Dec. 30, 2022
Does Shanghainese Arogant? （1）
We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are if you go to Guangzhou (a city in the South of China); how countrified if you go to Shanghai (a well-known Metropolit); how regretful if you have got married before you go to Chongqing (a city in the Southwest of China) where I have written some words before.
Starting from today. I'd like to write something about the city of Shanghai. First, I must admit that I don't quite understand this city and the people who are living there. I only have three months of working experience in Shanghai in 2001, so it's totally my personal opinion. Generally, I like Shanghai and people who live there.
I heard that Shanghainese only respect people from Beijing. They even considered Hongkongnese were rednecks before 1949 (the year Communist China was established). When I was a child, my father told me that most Shanghainese do not make friends with people from other places, and only marry Shanghainese. If they go to other cities, they would try any possible ways to speak the Shanghai dialect.
In addition, my older sister's husband was born from a traditional Shanghai family. Their family moved from Shanghai to Chongqing (the place we are living) in the 1960s.
DoesAre People from Shanghainese Arrogant? （1）
We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are if you go to Guangzhou (a city in the South of China); how countrified you are if you go to Shanghai (a well-known Metropolits); how regretful you are if you have gotten married before you go to Chongqing (a city in the Southwest of China) whereich I have written some wordsabout before.
Starting from today.
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Starting today I'd like to write something about the city of Shanghai.
First, I must admit that I don't quite understand this city and the people who are livinglive there.
I only have three months of working experience in Shanghai and that was in 2001, so it's totally my personal opinion.
Generally, I like Shanghai and the people who live there.
I heard that Shanghainese only respect people from Beijing.
They even considered Hongkongnese wereas rednecks before 1949, (the year Communist China was established).
面白そうです。
When I was a child, my father told me that most Shanghainese do not make friends with people from other places, and only marry Shanghainese.
If they go to other cities, they would try anyll possible ways to speak the Shanghai dialect.
In addition, my older sister's husband was born from a traditional Shanghai family.
Their family moved from Shanghai to Chongqing (the place we are living) in the 1960s.
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初めて知りました。上手に書けています！
DoesAre the Shanghainese Arrogant? （1）
We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are if you go to Guangzhou (a city in the South of China); how countrifiedrural you are if you go to Shanghai (a well-known Metropolits); or how regretful you will be if you have got married before you go to Chongqing (a city in the Southwest of China) where I have written some words before).
Countrified doesn't really work here - how about 'rural'?
Starting from today.,
Better ending with a comma and linking to next sentence
I'd like to write something about the city of Shanghai.
I only have three months of working experience in Shanghai infrom 2001, so it'this is totally my personal opinion.
Generally, I like Shanghai and the people who live there.
They even considered the Hongk Kongnese were rednecks before 1949 (the year Communist China was established).
When I was a child, my father told me that most Shanghainese do not make friends with people from other places, and only marry Shanghainese.
If they go to other cities, they would try any possible ways to speak with the Shanghai dialect anyway.
In addition, my older sister's husband was born frominto a traditional Shanghai family.
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Very good, well-written. I lived in Shanghai for a while and even visited Chongqing (although after I had married!) so this resonates with me!
Dec. 31, 2022
Oh, thank you! Must be a wonderful time in Shanghai.:-)
DoesAre Shanghainese Arrogant? （1）
We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are ifuntil you go to Guangzhou (a city in the Ssouth of China / in southern China); how countrified ifuntil you go to Shanghai (a well-known Mmetropolits); how regretfulor, if you have got(ten) married before you go to Chongqing (a city in the Ssouthwest of China) where I have written some words before / in southwestern China about which I have written some words before), how much you regret getting married until you go to Chongqing.
Starting from today., I’d like to…
I think you meant to end this phrase with a comma, not a period.
Starting from today, I'd like to write something about the city of Shanghai.
First, I must admit that I don't quite understand this city and the people who are living there.
I only have three months of working experience in Shanghai, in 2001, so it's totally my personal opinion.
Generally, I like Shanghai and some/many/all people who live there.
I heard that Shanghainese only respect people from Beijing.
They even considered Hongkongnese were rednecks before 1949 (the year Communist China was established).
Dec. 31, 2022
Thank you JoeTofu! :-)
DoesAre Shanghainese Apeople arrogant?
First, I must admit that I don't quite understand this city andor the people who are living there.
I only have three months of working experience in Shanghai, which I got in 2001, so it's totally my personaljust my opinion.
"my personal opinion" is not wrong, but "my opinion" is a lot more natural. as an opinion is a personal belief, saying "personal opinion" is repetitive
When I was a child, my father told me that most Shanghainese people do not make friends with people from other places, and only marry other Shanghainese people.
Dec. 31, 2022
Thank you! I guess "Shanghainese people" is more respectful than "Shanghainese".
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We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are if you go to Guangzhou (a city in the South of China); how countrified if you go to Shanghai (a well-known Metropolit); how regretful if you have got married before you go to Chongqing (a city in the Southwest of China) where I have written some words before. We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are if you go to Guangzhou (a city in the South of China); how Countrified doesn't really work here - how about 'rural'? We have a popular saying: you don't know how poor you are if you go to Guangzhou (a city in the South of China); how countrified you are if you go to Shanghai (a well-known Metropoli |
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Starting from today. Starting from today I think you meant to end this phrase with a comma, not a period. Starting from today Better ending with a comma and linking to next sentence
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Generally, I like Shanghai and people who live there. Generally, I like Shanghai and some/many/all people who live there. Generally, I like Shanghai and the people who live there. Generally, I like Shanghai and the people who live there. |
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When I was a child, my father told me that most Shanghainese do not make friends with people from other places, and only marry Shanghainese. When I was a child, my father told me that most Shanghainese people do not make friends with people from other places, and only marry other Shanghainese people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If they go to other cities, they would try any possible ways to speak the Shanghai dialect. If they go to other cities, they would try If they go to other cities, they would try a |
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In addition, my older sister's husband was born from a traditional Shanghai family. In addition, my older sister's husband was born This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Their family moved from Shanghai to Chongqing (the place we are living) in the 1960s. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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