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Since we were kids, we heard phrases like "money isn't everything" or "youit can'’t buy you happiness".

The truth is that money can improve many aspects of life: it reduces stress for basic needs; it allows access to health, housing, education, and also, to enjoyable mo gives access to entertainments.

A person can have money and feel alone, empty, or without purpose.

Emotional health, relationships, a sense of purpose, and quality free timof life are things money can't guarantee.

Also, the rush to have more money can bring anxiety, constant comparison, and a feeling of insufficiency, no matter how much you earn now.

Also, tThere is also another side: idealizesing poverty as something morally superior or thinking that those who want to earn more money are "materialistic".

Maybe what matters is how we use money, and the place it has in our priorities. ( the importance it has in our lives)

SEver since we were kids, we have heard phrases like "money isn't everything" or "you can't buy happiness".

"Since" used in this context can carry a connotation similar to "porque," because "because" and "since" are sometimes used the same way, but "ever since" tells the reader right away that something has been going on for a long time. The present perfect construction "have heard" shows that a past action continues to impact the present, whereas "heard" suggests something confined to the past.

But we also saw how many people work hard every day to earn more, to improve their lifestyle, or simply to make it to the end of the month without anxiety.

Some discourage beginning with the conjunction "but" like this. "However" or "Nevertheless" (sin embargo) would be more formal ways to achieve the same contrasting effect.

The truth is that money can improve many aspects of life: it reduces stress fover basic needs; it and allows access to health, housing, education, and also, to enjoyable moments.

The colon tells the reader that a list is coming, and I see two things on the list:

1. it reduces stress over basic needs ("over" indicates that the cause of people's stress is their difficulty meeting daily needs)

2. it allows access to health, housing, education, and also enjoyable moments.

Since there are only two things in the main list, no comma is needed to separate them (unless you wanted to say "...basic needs, and it allows...")

I removed "to" near the end because the initial "to" still applies. A more formal way of saying it more aligned with the "official" categories of "health, housing, education" could be "leisure activities" instead of "enjoyable moments".

Economic stability gives us peace, freedom to make decisions and a space to enjoy without constantly worrying.

I won't add a correction here, but maybe consider whether the "oxford comma" before the "and" should be in this sentence like it appears to be in the previous one and in (creo) two other sentences in this paragraph. It is not required, but the writer generally sticks to either using it or not using it.

Also, the rush to have more money can bring anxiety, constant comparison, and a feeling of insufficiency, no matter how much you earn now.

You could also say "you now earn" or just "you earn".

Also, there is another side: idealizeing poverty as something morally superior or thinking that those who want to earn more money are "materialistic".

Either "to idealize" or "idealizing" would work here, but "idealize" sounds like a command or like it should have something before it (for example, "some people idealize..."). Since you say "thinking," then "idealizing" matches it.

Maybe what matters is how we use money, and the place it has in our priorities.

Unless the comma was only added for emphasis or literary style, it is not required here.

Since we were kids, wWe've heard phrases like "money isn't everything" or "you can't buy happiness" since we were kids.

We use we've (we have) because it is an action that happened in the past, at no specific point in time (present perfect simple). Moved "since we were kinds to the ends because it sounds a little more natural

But wWe also saw how many people worked hard every day to earn more, to improve their lifestyle, or simply to make it to the end of the month without anxiety.

We try not to start sentences in english with the word "but" when we want to write formally.

The truth is that money can improve many aspects of life: i. It reduces stress foraround basic needs; it allows access to health, housing, education, and also, to gives us enjoyable moments.

Economic stability gives us peace, as well as freedom to make decisions and a spacethe ability to enjoy life without constantly worrying.

as well as is another way to say and

ButHowever, happiness is not only that.

However is another way to say but

Also, tThere is also another side: we idealize poverty as something morally superior or thinking that those who want to earn more money are "materialistic"."

Moved the word "also" to avoid sounding repetitive.

It is an unfair visionstereotype.

stereotypes are ideas over a certain group of people

Maybe what matters is how we use our money, and the place it has in our priorities.