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abc90377

July 9, 2024

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Doctor

Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition. The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long wait for my turn. He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours. To speed up the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing. Probably not very private, but no one complains about it. When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.
The dialogue is always something like this:
Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."
Doctor: "That's because the weather is hotter recently. Turn your air conditioning colder."
I think the doctor has his own dry wit. When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.

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Doctor

Right now, I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.

The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long wait for my turntime to reserve an appointment with him.

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.

To speed up the waiting process, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.

PThis is probably not very privatea private way to resolve the waiting process, but no one complains about it.

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.

The dialogue is always something like this: ¶
Patient:
usually goes like this.¶
The patient states,
"Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

Doctor: The doctor replies,"That's because the weather ishas been hotter recently. Turn on your air conditioning."

Turn your air conditioning colder."

I combined it with the previous sentence.

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but. Since he has seen so many similar cases that he just, he answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.

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abc90377

July 10, 2024

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Thank you so much! Very helpful:)

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marblemenow

July 10, 2024

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You're welcome.

Doctor

Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.

The doctor is very famous, so itI always takes a long waithave to wait long for my turn.

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.

To speed uphorten the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.

Probably not very private, but no one complains about it.

Whilen I sit oin the chairlinic room waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient before me.

The dialogue is always something like this:

Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

Doctor: "That's because the weather is getting hotter recently.

Turn up your air conditioning colder."

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as ifthough he's brushing off dust from a table.

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I imagine he sees all sorts of funny things, as well!

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abc90377

July 11, 2024

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I believe he sees every day haha. Thank you so much!

Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for mya health condition.

“My” is correct if your readers already know about the condition.

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the formerprevious patient.

A “former patient” is someone who has ceased to be a patient—who doesn’t go to this doctor anymore, for example.

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I like kaysik’s corrections, so won’t bother marking the rest.

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JoeTofu

July 9, 2024

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You can edit your correction—click the Corrected button. :-)

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abc90377

July 10, 2024

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Thank you so much :)

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JoeTofu

July 10, 2024

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Doctor

Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.

The doctor is very famous, so it is always takes a long wait for my turn.

or "so it always takes a long time"

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.

To speed speed up the waitingprocess, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.

Or "To reduce the wait times". You can't make waiting go faster - it takes however long it takes. You can make it take less time by speeding up the doctor but you cannot speed up the waiting - you cannot "wait faster" etc (hope that makes sense).

Probably not very private, but no one complains about it.

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.

The dialogue is always something like this: Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

Doctor: "That's because the weather is hotter recently.

Turn your air conditioning colder."

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.

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kaysik

July 9, 2024

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(I don't know why it has "speed" twice in a arow in my 2nd correction - it should just be "To speed up the process, ...")

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JoeTofu

July 9, 2024

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You can edit your correction—click the Corrected button. :-)

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abc90377

July 10, 2024

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@kaysik Ah, I got what you mean. Thank you so much for your corrections and detailed explanation:)
@JoeTofu Thanks for the help, I don't know I can edit my correction too haha.

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JoeTofu

July 10, 2024

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Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.


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Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for mya health condition.

“My” is correct if your readers already know about the condition.

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Right now, I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.

The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long wait for my turn.


The doctor is very famous, so it is always takes a long wait for my turn.

or "so it always takes a long time"

The doctor is very famous, so itI always takes a long waithave to wait long for my turn.

The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long wait for my turntime to reserve an appointment with him.

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.


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To speed up the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.


To speed speed up the waitingprocess, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.

Or "To reduce the wait times". You can't make waiting go faster - it takes however long it takes. You can make it take less time by speeding up the doctor but you cannot speed up the waiting - you cannot "wait faster" etc (hope that makes sense).

To speed uphorten the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.

To speed up the waiting process, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.

Probably not very private, but no one complains about it.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

PThis is probably not very privatea private way to resolve the waiting process, but no one complains about it.

The dialogue is always something like this: Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The dialogue is always something like this:

Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

The dialogue is always something like this: ¶
Patient:
usually goes like this.¶
The patient states,
"Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as ifthough he's brushing off dust from a table.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but. Since he has seen so many similar cases that he just, he answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the formerprevious patient.

A “former patient” is someone who has ceased to be a patient—who doesn’t go to this doctor anymore, for example.

Whilen I sit oin the chairlinic room waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient before me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Doctor: "That's because the weather is hotter recently.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Doctor: "That's because the weather is getting hotter recently.

Doctor: The doctor replies,"That's because the weather ishas been hotter recently. Turn on your air conditioning."

Turn your air conditioning colder."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Turn up your air conditioning colder."

Turn your air conditioning colder."

I combined it with the previous sentence.

To speed up the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while while the current consultation is still ongoing.


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