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Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition. The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long wait for my turn. He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours. To speed up the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing. Probably not very private, but no one complains about it. When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.
The dialogue is always something like this:
Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."
Doctor: "That's because the weather is hotter recently. Turn your air conditioning colder."
I think the doctor has his own dry wit. When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.

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Doctor

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.

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Doctor

Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.

Probably not very private, but no one complains about it.

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.

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Doctor

Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.

Probably not very private, but no one complains about it.

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.

The dialogue is always something like this: Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

Doctor: "That's because the weather is hotter recently.

Turn your air conditioning colder."

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.

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Right now I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.


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Right now, I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition. Right now, I see the gynecologist once a month for my health condition.

The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long wait for my turn.


The doctor is very famous, so it is always takes a long wait for my turn. The doctor is very famous, so it is always a long wait for my turn.

or "so it always takes a long time"

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The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long wait for my turntime to reserve an appointment with him. The doctor is very famous, so it always takes a long time to reserve an appointment with him.

He needs to see around 100 patients in four or five hours.


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To speed up the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.


To speed speed up the waitingprocess, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing. To speed speed up the process, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing.

Or "To reduce the wait times". You can't make waiting go faster - it takes however long it takes. You can make it take less time by speeding up the doctor but you cannot speed up the waiting - you cannot "wait faster" etc (hope that makes sense).

To speed uphorten the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing. To shorten the wait, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room while the current consultation is still ongoing.

To speed up the waiting process, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is still ongoing. To speed up the waiting process, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while the current consultation is ongoing.

Probably not very private, but no one complains about it.


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PThis is probably not very privatea private way to resolve the waiting process, but no one complains about it. This is probably not a private way to resolve the waiting process, but no one complains about it.

The dialogue is always something like this: Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."


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The dialogue is always something like this: Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently." The dialogue is always something like this: Patient: "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

The dialogue is always something like this: Patient:usually goes like this. The patient states, "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently." The dialogue usually goes like this. The patient states, "Doctor, I feel very dry and hot recently."

I think the doctor has his own dry wit.


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I think the doctor has his own dry wit. I think the doctor has his dry wit.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.


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When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as ifthough he's brushing off dust from a table. When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but he has seen so many similar cases that he just answers as though he's brushing off dust from a table.

When we're sick, we become very paranoid, but. Since he has seen so many similar cases that he just, he answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table. When we're sick, we become very paranoid. Since he has seen so many similar cases, he answers as if he's brushing off dust from a table.

When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient.


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When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the formerprevious patient. When I sit on the chair waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the previous patient.

A “former patient” is someone who has ceased to be a patient—who doesn’t go to this doctor anymore, for example.

Whilen I sit oin the chairlinic room waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the former patient before me. While I sit in the clinic room waiting for my consultation, I inevitably hear the conversation between the doctor and the patient before me.

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Doctor: "That's because the weather is hotter recently.


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Doctor: "That's because the weather is getting hotter recently. Doctor: "That's because the weather is getting hotter recently.

Doctor: The doctor replies,"That's because the weather ishas been hotter recently. Turn on your air conditioning." The doctor replies,"That's because the weather has been hotter recently. Turn on your air conditioning."

Turn your air conditioning colder."


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Turn up your air conditioning colder." Turn up your air conditioning."

Turn your air conditioning colder."

I combined it with the previous sentence.

To speed up the waiting, the nurse will let the next patient enter the clinic room to wait while while the current consultation is still ongoing.


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