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TOMO_o

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Do you wear hats often?

Although I like hunting cups and I have some, I don't often wear hats. I know I should protect myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget hats. They say that head tend to be thinning hair with frequent wearing hats. Is this true?

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Although I like hunting cuaps, and I haveown some of them, I don't often wear hats.

I know I should be protecting myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget to wear hats.

They say that head tend to be thinning hair with frequent wearing hatswearing hats frequently causes your hair to thin out.

Is this true?

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Putting on my medical researcher's hat on here: no, baldness has absolutely nothing to do with how frequently you wear hats. Go ahead and wear them in good health.

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TOMO_o

yesterday

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Every time I look at the corrections, I wonder why I didn't think of them before, as they are such simple sentences.
From now on, I will try to wear a hat as much as possible.

Although I like and own hunting cups and I have someaps, I don't often wear hatsthem.

I know I should protect myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget about wearing hats.

They say that headfrequently wearing hats tends to bcause thinning hair with frequent wearing hats.

I think people wear hats to hide thinning hair. :)

Is this true?

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TOMO_o

yesterday

57

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Every time I look at the corrections, I wonder why I didn't think of them before, as they are such simple sentences.
From now on, I will try to wear a hat as much as possible.

Although I like hunting cuaps and I have some, I don't often wear hats.

I know I should protect myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget (to wear) hats.

I would add in this bit

They say that head tend to be thinning hair with frequent wearing hatfrequently wearing hats can cause hair thinning/loss.

Rearranged this to make it work

Is this true?

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Great job.

I would say it depends on circumstances, but generally speaking, simply wearing a hat should not cause hair damage. I always wear a cap when I go running or spend time in my garden. In any case, I would take care of my skin at the expense of my hair (hair does not get wrinkles or cancer)

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TOMO_o

yesterday

57

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Every time I look at the corrections, I wonder why I didn't think of them before, as they are such simple sentences.
From now on, I will try to wear a hat as much as possible.

Do you wear hats often?


Although I like hunting cups and I have some, I don't often wear hats.


Although I like hunting cuaps and I have some, I don't often wear hats.

Although I like and own hunting cups and I have someaps, I don't often wear hatsthem.

Although I like hunting cuaps, and I haveown some of them, I don't often wear hats.

I know I should protect myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget hats.


I know I should protect myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget (to wear) hats.

I would add in this bit

I know I should protect myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget about wearing hats.

I know I should be protecting myself from the hazardous UV rays, but I often forget to wear hats.

They say that head tend to be thinning hair with frequent wearing hats.


They say that head tend to be thinning hair with frequent wearing hatfrequently wearing hats can cause hair thinning/loss.

Rearranged this to make it work

They say that headfrequently wearing hats tends to bcause thinning hair with frequent wearing hats.

I think people wear hats to hide thinning hair. :)

They say that head tend to be thinning hair with frequent wearing hatswearing hats frequently causes your hair to thin out.

Is this true?


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